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lavender

haiku

81 total reviews 
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi JMF,

Ooooh, I love this poem, and lavender! Beautiful verse and presentation, my friend, and a great contest entry. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you Jan for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Coco Jane
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Cute pun!
Puns are so much fun. My son is a master of them--the real groaners.
This poem has fun with the city AND the fact that lavender is a theraputic oil. Good thinking!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Mastery
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I just read another poem about lavender, was that yours by any chance? LOL Sorry, either way this is absolutely a beautiful thought expressed so verywell, Janet. Good job. God bless you and good luck. I think you have a real winner here. Bob

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you Bob for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.

    I've written a few about lavender but this is the only one I've posted.
    Blessings
    Janet
reply by Mastery on 16-Apr-2019
    :) You are so talented, Janet.
Comment from Gloria ....
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I really like this haiku, Janet. First off lavender is so beautiful and a roma therapy is a terrific satori line.

Very fine poem and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you Gloria for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Gail Denham
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Oh I do like this - and the play on words. excellent. and I love lavender - someone gave us some bushes last year - I don't think they made it and they never did produce anything special, as far as nice lavender with good smell. oh well. have to buy some.
nice poem

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.

    I can't seem to get lavender to bloom either. :(
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from LG Wolfe
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Hello contest author,

I'm learning the art of haiku by reading a lot of entries, so forgive me if I don't know all the technical elements. But - your work gave me a smile in the last line. The poem was gentle, soft with a touch of humour. Well done and good luck.

LG

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you LG for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a great haiku for the contest. Good luck in the contest. May your weekend be blessed with joy, love and peace.
Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you Patricia for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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I think this is beautiful and brilliant, following the proper format of a Haiku. I love the artwork, and the picture you painted with your words. Such clever usage of 'Italian skies' and 'Roma' therapy.
I wish you the very best in the contest :)

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your haiku, Jmt. Good job on its style and 'play on words'. Your words are descriptive and create great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you Jan for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from nancyjam
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I love lavender and I love this Haiku
with its clever third line.
The imagery is lovely.
I can see it on the Hills in Italy.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you Nancy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
    Blessings
    Janet