Revelations of Age
Would that we could always hold on to the fairies...52 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is quite clever and very well thought out. Those moths would indeed look like those fairies of fantasy hovering around the fire. I like the way you've presented this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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This is quite clever and very well thought out. Those moths would indeed look like those fairies of fantasy hovering around the fire. I like the way you've presented this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Jeffrey -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Yvette.
-A good topic and well
written cinquain.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration.
-I like how the poem goes
from dainty fairies to
"mere moths."
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Yvette.
-A good topic and well
written cinquain.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration.
-I like how the poem goes
from dainty fairies to
"mere moths."
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Pam -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
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You are very welcome, Yvette. I can't imagine the work involved with putting everything on line. I wonder if you do that weekly or more, and if the students work at their own pace or just for the week. Hope it smooths out soon.