Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Reflecting"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, blessed are those who have leisure to find such a place and to stand there. . . . reflecting on their choices both wise and foolish.
Your words and illustration capture this dream, and preserve it forever, in this post.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Dear Author, blessed are those who have leisure to find such a place and to stand there. . . . reflecting on their choices both wise and foolish.
Your words and illustration capture this dream, and preserve it forever, in this post.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Suzanna, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Janetsue
This is such an interesting and contemplative posting...an excellent entry for the 25 syllable poem contest. The photograph is taken in such a soothing place, it is easy to imagine oneself doing exactly this right at that exact spot. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This is such an interesting and contemplative posting...an excellent entry for the 25 syllable poem contest. The photograph is taken in such a soothing place, it is easy to imagine oneself doing exactly this right at that exact spot. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Spangle, I value your time spent reading and reviewing my poem. Have a splendid weekend!
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray all is well in your life. What a lovely 25 syllable poem about reflection? It's nice to look back over our days and remember of bygone days. You definitely met the poem's requirement. I love the imagery of a man looking out and reflecting of days gone by at a mountain stream. I love your message. Sometimes we need to be still and reflect on our lives. Nicely done. Happy future writing:-)
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hello,
I pray all is well in your life. What a lovely 25 syllable poem about reflection? It's nice to look back over our days and remember of bygone days. You definitely met the poem's requirement. I love the imagery of a man looking out and reflecting of days gone by at a mountain stream. I love your message. Sometimes we need to be still and reflect on our lives. Nicely done. Happy future writing:-)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hello Joyce, I value your time spent reading and commenting on my poem, I pray too that you and yours are well and that sun shines over your shoulder all weekend.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ben Colder
I can relate to this poem and photo. Both are strong to me.
I see nothing wrong with this write and thank the poet for a job well done.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I can relate to this poem and photo. Both are strong to me.
I see nothing wrong with this write and thank the poet for a job well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Ben, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Janet Foor
great picture for the nostalgic 25-word poem. I enjoyed each line as you shared "taking time to reflect while catching your my reflection.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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great picture for the nostalgic 25-word poem. I enjoyed each line as you shared "taking time to reflect while catching your my reflection.
Nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Janet, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.I find, for me, the older I get the more reflecting I do. Be blest this weekend in full measure of God's gifts.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your twenty-five syllables in this lovely, descriptive piece. We all need at least one special spot where we go to reminisce. Yours sounds appealing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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You have made excellent use of your twenty-five syllables in this lovely, descriptive piece. We all need at least one special spot where we go to reminisce. Yours sounds appealing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Janice, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, yes I liked this reflective poem, short as it is. You managed to say a lot in just twenty-five syllables and that's not a mean feat. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hi there, yes I liked this reflective poem, short as it is. You managed to say a lot in just twenty-five syllables and that's not a mean feat. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Ulla, I value your time taken to read and comment on my poem, may your days be filled with good health, good cheer and good writings..
Comment from godlucifer
memories fades,the present is to reflect on,and the future gives us hope of that reflection. your poem was thoroughly thought out. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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memories fades,the present is to reflect on,and the future gives us hope of that reflection. your poem was thoroughly thought out. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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godlucifer, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I liked the imagery in this piece. Sometimes I think it is good to take a step back and take some time for ourselves and think over again days that have already been. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I liked the imagery in this piece. Sometimes I think it is good to take a step back and take some time for ourselves and think over again days that have already been. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Jacob, I so value your time taken to review and comment on my poem. May you be well and your life filled with unimaginable Joy!
Comment from elchupakabra
This was a calming piece, reflecting on days of yore is something I think many of us are prone to do. Good work on this short piece, best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This was a calming piece, reflecting on days of yore is something I think many of us are prone to do. Good work on this short piece, best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.