Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Hand In Hand"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from enjoi
Considering the intent of your poem and the rather constrained format, I think you did rather well with it. Not my usual cup of tea, but you did really well. Good luck with the contest.
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Considering the intent of your poem and the rather constrained format, I think you did rather well with it. Not my usual cup of tea, but you did really well. Good luck with the contest.
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thank you
Comment from Frozen Fire
I love the comparison/metaphor of love lifting you as high as a soaring bird. Anyone can ramble on to get a point across in a written piece, but you managed to do this with this wonderful short poem. I wish you lots of luck with the contest!
Shirley
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I love the comparison/metaphor of love lifting you as high as a soaring bird. Anyone can ramble on to get a point across in a written piece, but you managed to do this with this wonderful short poem. I wish you lots of luck with the contest!
Shirley
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Comment from Joan E.
You have certainly written an evocative poem with your nine simple words. I could feel the strong emotion of love and enjoyed your bit of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest.
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You have certainly written an evocative poem with your nine simple words. I could feel the strong emotion of love and enjoyed your bit of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment from spiceydog
Not sure about what the hail means on the birds wings? I like your thought how she hoping and looking to find love. Good write and thought.
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Not sure about what the hail means on the birds wings? I like your thought how she hoping and looking to find love. Good write and thought.
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Comment from fionageorge
That, my dear friend, is what I call a short poem. Yet your few words have such a poignant and beautiful ring to it. I would imagine the date of this piece means a lot to you.
Warmest regards and good luck in the contest.
Marijke
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That, my dear friend, is what I call a short poem. Yet your few words have such a poignant and beautiful ring to it. I would imagine the date of this piece means a lot to you.
Warmest regards and good luck in the contest.
Marijke
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Comment from Treasuregirl
To me faith and love have always gone 'hand in hand' as I don't see how you can have one without the other Your little poem sums this up beautifully. The picture is a good foil for your writing. It also looks very "Englishy" - am I right?
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To me faith and love have always gone 'hand in hand' as I don't see how you can have one without the other Your little poem sums this up beautifully. The picture is a good foil for your writing. It also looks very "Englishy" - am I right?
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you are and thank you
Comment from adewpearl
I like the coupling of faith and love because true, committed love really does require a big leap of faith, and I love the choice of blooms as the verb, such a positive word - and then to introduce birds into the setting - quite romantic :-) Good luck in the short love poem contest. Brooke
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I like the coupling of faith and love because true, committed love really does require a big leap of faith, and I love the choice of blooms as the verb, such a positive word - and then to introduce birds into the setting - quite romantic :-) Good luck in the short love poem contest. Brooke
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Comment from Pete Ak...
Not quite getting this... use of the word 'blooms' which you then relate to birds is not an allusion i relate to. It's quite likely I'm just dumb!
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Not quite getting this... use of the word 'blooms' which you then relate to birds is not an allusion i relate to. It's quite likely I'm just dumb!
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Comment from rudywalsh
Well done a beautiful little poem, with a deep message enrolled between the lines.
I'm sure I have seen the image before.
The image and poem fit together perfectly, I hope you did well in the contest, your entry looks like class, all the best Rudy.
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Well done a beautiful little poem, with a deep message enrolled between the lines.
I'm sure I have seen the image before.
The image and poem fit together perfectly, I hope you did well in the contest, your entry looks like class, all the best Rudy.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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thank you this is the fist time image was issued
Comment from honeytree
Reaching ones destination to be with ones love, is very special.Being in love is so special for us all, within our lives.
Wonderful writing and art work.
Honeytree.
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Reaching ones destination to be with ones love, is very special.Being in love is so special for us all, within our lives.
Wonderful writing and art work.
Honeytree.
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thank you