Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Her life she must endure"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from AlvinTEthington
You describe the hardship of a woman married to a man who has to travel a lot for his employment. She often has to carry the burden of both parents. I love the comparison in the antepenultimate line.
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You describe the hardship of a woman married to a man who has to travel a lot for his employment. She often has to carry the burden of both parents. I love the comparison in the antepenultimate line.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thanks for the comment Alvin was revised
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I revised the review and raised the rating.
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thank you Alvin
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from spellbound
Well done. This is not only the life of the cowgirl. Most can relate. However, for me, my enduring is not because of the things I gave up, but the worries for those I have brought into the world and the one I share this responsibility.
Thank you for sharing.
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Well done. This is not only the life of the cowgirl. Most can relate. However, for me, my enduring is not because of the things I gave up, but the worries for those I have brought into the world and the one I share this responsibility.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thanks for reading spellbound
Comment from hfriscia
Well, this is a good poem to read...Right to the point, the theme is interesting...You did a good job, telling a tale of a lady, changing lives...
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Well, this is a good poem to read...Right to the point, the theme is interesting...You did a good job, telling a tale of a lady, changing lives...
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you hfriscia
Comment from Realist101
Another gem. So many of us gals have to just live with what cards we are dealt. I have accepted my life, living with pain, and trying to be thankful for what I do have left...I love this photo too, just gorgeous...Susan
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Another gem. So many of us gals have to just live with what cards we are dealt. I have accepted my life, living with pain, and trying to be thankful for what I do have left...I love this photo too, just gorgeous...Susan
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you Susan
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
The romantic ideas of the cowgirl as with many others does not last forever.
Somewhere along the line there comes a true reality check, where there are duties and children to attend to, and lonliness to contend with.
Juliette
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The romantic ideas of the cowgirl as with many others does not last forever.
Somewhere along the line there comes a true reality check, where there are duties and children to attend to, and lonliness to contend with.
Juliette
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thanks for reading Juliette
Comment from percival86jack
Life moves on and we realize the fairy tale life we thought we would someday have was just that... a fairy tale! Neat stuff! Cheers, Jack
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Life moves on and we realize the fairy tale life we thought we would someday have was just that... a fairy tale! Neat stuff! Cheers, Jack
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thanks for reading Jack
Comment from bard owl
Indeed life does change as we grow older and circumstances change. Your poem has very vivid imagery that remains clear throughout. The work is sad with a sense of endurance replacing enjoyment. Thoughtful read, this one. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Indeed life does change as we grow older and circumstances change. Your poem has very vivid imagery that remains clear throughout. The work is sad with a sense of endurance replacing enjoyment. Thoughtful read, this one. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thanks for reading Linda
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Beautifully written, by a real cowboy who would know. Did Cowgirls wear pearls and lace? I pictures them in wranglers and chaps! LOL- Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. Betty
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Beautifully written, by a real cowboy who would know. Did Cowgirls wear pearls and lace? I pictures them in wranglers and chaps! LOL- Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. Betty
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Betty yes befor the wedding then ...well
Comment from Kingsland
This kind of fits in with the other poem I reviewed of yours this day. I liked this piece of poetic art as much as the last one I reviewed from you. This was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
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This kind of fits in with the other poem I reviewed of yours this day. I liked this piece of poetic art as much as the last one I reviewed from you. This was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you John
Comment from Bellringer
Very well done poem. The line, "Her cowgirl ways of pearls and lace replaced with the Wal-Mart store." exemplifies the sadness of her life. There are many examples of lost dreams and unmet promises in literature. This is a particularly good one. Best wishes.
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Very well done poem. The line, "Her cowgirl ways of pearls and lace replaced with the Wal-Mart store." exemplifies the sadness of her life. There are many examples of lost dreams and unmet promises in literature. This is a particularly good one. Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-May-2010
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thank you Bell