Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
Finally, some action. This is excellently written, without any nits that I could see, but I must admit that the story held me and some minor blemishes might have gone unnoticed.
Dave
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Barbara,
Finally, some action. This is excellently written, without any nits that I could see, but I must admit that the story held me and some minor blemishes might have gone unnoticed.
Dave
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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I was worried about this chapter, because I write romance not action so I was worried it wouldn't work. I have about three more action posts before we find out if Cassie is rescued or not. I am worried I can't pull it off. Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from LadyWave
The action was well done. I could feel the tension all the way through the scene as Joe and the men stormed the house. Anxious to see the next installment!
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The action was well done. I could feel the tension all the way through the scene as Joe and the men stormed the house. Anxious to see the next installment!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rama Rao
An excellent chapter full of action which made absorbing reading. Now I think the young girl Cassey will be rescued and returned to her mother. I'm beginning to wonder where you will take the story from there.
It's so good to know you are making good progress with your treatment. Wishing you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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An excellent chapter full of action which made absorbing reading. Now I think the young girl Cassey will be rescued and returned to her mother. I'm beginning to wonder where you will take the story from there.
It's so good to know you are making good progress with your treatment. Wishing you the best of luck.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind thoughts and the review.
Comment from pickthorn
This was a very exciting and you described the action very well. I am glad that you are able to continue with the story while taking the treatments. I am looking forward to the next chapter to the story and also to your essay telling about your treatments. I admire your determination to continue the work on your story while undergoing the treatments. I will remember you in my thoughts and prayers.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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This was a very exciting and you described the action very well. I am glad that you are able to continue with the story while taking the treatments. I am looking forward to the next chapter to the story and also to your essay telling about your treatments. I admire your determination to continue the work on your story while undergoing the treatments. I will remember you in my thoughts and prayers.
pickthorn
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind thoughts and the review.
Comment from JW
A great chapter. You literally grab hold of the reader's interest and hold it to the end. The suspense maintained in this action=-illed chapter was excellent. One cannot help but wonder, what is going to happen next.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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A great chapter. You literally grab hold of the reader's interest and hold it to the end. The suspense maintained in this action=-illed chapter was excellent. One cannot help but wonder, what is going to happen next.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
as usual, you have caught me up in your story line and i will hate to see this end. you're like my favorite author, Sharon Sala that writes as Dinah McCall also. i can't get enough of her writing or yours. if you ever need me to promote a chapter for you, just let me know and I will. God bless you and keep you strong
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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as usual, you have caught me up in your story line and i will hate to see this end. you're like my favorite author, Sharon Sala that writes as Dinah McCall also. i can't get enough of her writing or yours. if you ever need me to promote a chapter for you, just let me know and I will. God bless you and keep you strong
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and your offer. I appreciate your kind nature.
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
The character Cassie, though incredibly soft and endearingly gentle, creative and spontaneous, I feel she has a strength that has yet to surface in full blown proportion. I like the intrigue so far...
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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The character Cassie, though incredibly soft and endearingly gentle, creative and spontaneous, I feel she has a strength that has yet to surface in full blown proportion. I like the intrigue so far...
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Cassie is an interesting young lady. Thank you for your kind review.
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Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - I'm thinking about lending you Dax! This is getting so riveting. I've chosen not to ask often how you are, but I want you to know that I do think about you. You are on the prayer list of two churches I go to, so about 250 Episcopal folks are praying for you ever week. Warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Hi Barbara - I'm thinking about lending you Dax! This is getting so riveting. I've chosen not to ask often how you are, but I want you to know that I do think about you. You are on the prayer list of two churches I go to, so about 250 Episcopal folks are praying for you ever week. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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You are sooooooo sweet. I appreciate your kind thoughts and prayers. I am doing well, under the circumstances.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
You continue to write at professional level. Strong narrative and dialogue in an emotional write as the men try to get the release of Cassie. Well done as always.
Duane
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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barbara.wilkey,
You continue to write at professional level. Strong narrative and dialogue in an emotional write as the men try to get the release of Cassie. Well done as always.
Duane
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review and support.
Comment from RKagan
Your novel is excellent it is filled with suspense and emotion. This chapter is a wonderful continuation of the earlier ones. I hope Cassie turns out to be in the house and that Joe is able to rescue her. I send you my prayers, and wish you well. God Bless you, my friend.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Your novel is excellent it is filled with suspense and emotion. This chapter is a wonderful continuation of the earlier ones. I hope Cassie turns out to be in the house and that Joe is able to rescue her. I send you my prayers, and wish you well. God Bless you, my friend.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your support and review. I appreciate both.