Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Part three Chapter four"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Shirley McLain
Always a good story. I'm interested to find out how you are going to let Troy and his dad find Anna and her child. I'll be ready for the next chapter when you can send it. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Always a good story. I'm interested to find out how you are going to let Troy and his dad find Anna and her child. I'll be ready for the next chapter when you can send it. Great job.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I have a feeling Anna may stay hidden for awhile.
Comment from K. L. Bauman
Another great piece of writing. You are amazing in being able to go through everything and still keep putting out such wonderful work.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Another great piece of writing. You are amazing in being able to go through everything and still keep putting out such wonderful work.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write with good descriptive story line. hi another enjoyble chapterand the characters are interesting and an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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A good write with good descriptive story line. hi another enjoyble chapterand the characters are interesting and an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind read.
Comment from adewpearl
Hurray for the end of the radiation and for your son's safe return home :-) Enjoy every minute of his visit.
Your dialogue sounds natural and the plot is certainly dramatic and interesting. Brooke
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Hurray for the end of the radiation and for your son's safe return home :-) Enjoy every minute of his visit.
Your dialogue sounds natural and the plot is certainly dramatic and interesting. Brooke
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from MS Writer
I'm very happy to hear that the radiation is at an end. Also it must be so opportune that you son is home for a visit. Good for the morale. I feel, although you say your mind is elsewhere, you have done a fine job in writing this continuing story. Well done and keep well.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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I'm very happy to hear that the radiation is at an end. Also it must be so opportune that you son is home for a visit. Good for the morale. I feel, although you say your mind is elsewhere, you have done a fine job in writing this continuing story. Well done and keep well.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Alaskastory
'Part three Chapter four' full leaves loads of questions that this reader longs for answers. The presentation of concern by both Paul and Troy is well written. Their worry for Anna sure is contagious. Really good chapter, Barbara.
past tense: "She hasn't file(d) for divorce yet.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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'Part three Chapter four' full leaves loads of questions that this reader longs for answers. The presentation of concern by both Paul and Troy is well written. Their worry for Anna sure is contagious. Really good chapter, Barbara.
past tense: "She hasn't file(d) for divorce yet.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Well written and its good to see Anna and Michael have friends who's trying to look after their best interest; I hope they're safe and out of harm's way. I can't stand Paul and hope (yeah, I know its wrong) he gets what's coming to him in the end. A great write my friend. Glad to hear you're doing well and your son is home for a visit.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Well written and its good to see Anna and Michael have friends who's trying to look after their best interest; I hope they're safe and out of harm's way. I can't stand Paul and hope (yeah, I know its wrong) he gets what's coming to him in the end. A great write my friend. Glad to hear you're doing well and your son is home for a visit.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JW
My. My. Doesn't this make for an interesting development. One wonders where did she go. This was another well written chapter.
I was glad to read that your done with radiation, and hope the burns aren't too painful.
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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My. My. Doesn't this make for an interesting development. One wonders where did she go. This was another well written chapter.
I was glad to read that your done with radiation, and hope the burns aren't too painful.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Writeaway...
An exhilerating read, barbara, bravo, your writing was clear, belivable and well-written, I couldn't find any SPAG issues an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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An exhilerating read, barbara, bravo, your writing was clear, belivable and well-written, I couldn't find any SPAG issues an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lola29
Well, this is a mystery I didn't see coming. Troy is acting so nonchalant about Anna and her son missing. I can't help but believe he knows something.
she hasn't (filed) for divorce yet
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Well, this is a mystery I didn't see coming. Troy is acting so nonchalant about Anna and her son missing. I can't help but believe he knows something.
she hasn't (filed) for divorce yet
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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Thank you for catching that mistake. I hate making first grade errors.