Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Part 4 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from rchitwood
Now I'll have to keep reading to see where Anna is. Domestic violence is the worst kind of kidnapping. I really enjoy reading your chapters. Keep writing Rita
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Now I'll have to keep reading to see where Anna is. Domestic violence is the worst kind of kidnapping. I really enjoy reading your chapters. Keep writing Rita
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another great chapter and I always enjoy reading your work. So they have brought in an expert to find Anna. I want to know where she went.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Another great chapter and I always enjoy reading your work. So they have brought in an expert to find Anna. I want to know where she went.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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I want to know too, (LOL. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Aarondodd1989
Excellent piece. The family feel genuine, the PI is friendly but professional, it covers a topic that many would prefer to avoid. There is great depth and strength in this peice. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Excellent piece. The family feel genuine, the PI is friendly but professional, it covers a topic that many would prefer to avoid. There is great depth and strength in this peice. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
Good addition the story. My sister worked a Battered woman's shelter and she said at first she couldn't understand why they stayed. It isn't that simple, is it. Your information at the end of your story is great. Can't wait for more.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Good addition the story. My sister worked a Battered woman's shelter and she said at first she couldn't understand why they stayed. It isn't that simple, is it. Your information at the end of your story is great. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. The batters find women with low self-esteems and continue tearing them down.
Comment from stanishmichelle
Betty's breakfast looks scrumptious. Everett seems capable so I feel more reassured that he'll get a lead soon. Hope Troy doesn't sty away too long, although I've gotten to know more about his company. it's a good business he has. The family is well respected and connected, which makes the story more intriguing to read. I enjoyed reading this very much.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Betty's breakfast looks scrumptious. Everett seems capable so I feel more reassured that he'll get a lead soon. Hope Troy doesn't sty away too long, although I've gotten to know more about his company. it's a good business he has. The family is well respected and connected, which makes the story more intriguing to read. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from axelbeariter
I'm full. If I'm going to find this woman, I'd better get going. Betty, once again, you out did yourself./out did should read outdid----Your transition chapter was well written as usual.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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I'm full. If I'm going to find this woman, I'd better get going. Betty, once again, you out did yourself./out did should read outdid----Your transition chapter was well written as usual.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Barbara,
A well written chapter. It does seem odd that many times women can't leave an abusive relationship. Abuse if far to prevalent in our society. Good dialouge and written in an emotive style.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Dear Barbara,
A well written chapter. It does seem odd that many times women can't leave an abusive relationship. Abuse if far to prevalent in our society. Good dialouge and written in an emotive style.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ....
I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book and there are just a few changes to suggest ....
* You have - Go visit with your dad. I suggest - Go and have a chat to your Dad.
* You have - headed toward the dining room table. After they sat at the table, and passed the food Everett started the conversation, "Troy, how long ... I suggest - headed towards the dining-room table. When they were all seated and the food had been passed to each one, Everett started the conversation. "Troy - how long .... (to avoid repetition of 'table.')
* You have - you out did yourself. I suggest - you
out-did yourself ....
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Hullo Barbara ....
I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book and there are just a few changes to suggest ....
* You have - Go visit with your dad. I suggest - Go and have a chat to your Dad.
* You have - headed toward the dining room table. After they sat at the table, and passed the food Everett started the conversation, "Troy, how long ... I suggest - headed towards the dining-room table. When they were all seated and the food had been passed to each one, Everett started the conversation. "Troy - how long .... (to avoid repetition of 'table.')
* You have - you out did yourself. I suggest - you
out-did yourself ....
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
chapter seventeen is splendidly written. Your spoiling me posting on a Monday. Your dialogue is great in you chapter. Troy goes to his parents to meet with Troy the PI. Once again you describe the food. Mm buttered biscuits sound yummy. Hey I haven't had supper yet and it's almost 5:30PM here and I don't eat past 6pm. I need to get off after finishing you review. Troy has to take a trip. I wonder where he's going. I look forward to your next chapter. Keep on writing excellent chapters like this one, my friend. I'm still praying for you to kick cancers butt totally.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Barbara,
chapter seventeen is splendidly written. Your spoiling me posting on a Monday. Your dialogue is great in you chapter. Troy goes to his parents to meet with Troy the PI. Once again you describe the food. Mm buttered biscuits sound yummy. Hey I haven't had supper yet and it's almost 5:30PM here and I don't eat past 6pm. I need to get off after finishing you review. Troy has to take a trip. I wonder where he's going. I look forward to your next chapter. Keep on writing excellent chapters like this one, my friend. I'm still praying for you to kick cancers butt totally.
Melissa.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you Melissa for your wonderful support and review. Now go eat.
Comment from Janie King
Oh my, where is this poor girl hiding? the mystery continues...sigh..This is well-written and definitely held my interest. Good job. God bless.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Oh my, where is this poor girl hiding? the mystery continues...sigh..This is well-written and definitely held my interest. Good job. God bless.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.