Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Part 2, Chapter 12"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from The Stranger
I have been folllowing this story for what seems an eternity now, but evry chapter is as fresh as the very first, I hope the outcome is as sould be
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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I have been folllowing this story for what seems an eternity now, but evry chapter is as fresh as the very first, I hope the outcome is as sould be
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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It has drawn out, because I have used some short posts. It only has about 38000 words and that includes next weeks post. I am working on winding it down. I have one more big exciting part and the rest is Anna and Troy building a relationship.
Comment from Maxxx
i enjoyed this snapshot of your book. and admire your efforts to educate about a life-threatening condition, which so many are in the dark about. i relate to your characters, they are engaging. the possible romance is intriguing. the shock anna feels is real to me. i really enjoy your straight-forward dialogue and style. great read! and admire you class in handling a subject that could have been done with cruder sexual references. well done!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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i enjoyed this snapshot of your book. and admire your efforts to educate about a life-threatening condition, which so many are in the dark about. i relate to your characters, they are engaging. the possible romance is intriguing. the shock anna feels is real to me. i really enjoy your straight-forward dialogue and style. great read! and admire you class in handling a subject that could have been done with cruder sexual references. well done!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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I appreciate your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
I have a very good friend who died of Hepatitis C a few years ago, but I don't know anything about the B version. She gave me a little pillow which I sleep with and I think of her often.
One more outburst and I'll fine all of you with[in] contempt of court.
I have doctor visits every three month[s] and he checks my liver.
Roberta
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I have a very good friend who died of Hepatitis C a few years ago, but I don't know anything about the B version. She gave me a little pillow which I sleep with and I think of her often.
One more outburst and I'll fine all of you with[in] contempt of court.
I have doctor visits every three month[s] and he checks my liver.
Roberta
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for catching those and I will make the correction.
Comment from jadapenn
Short chapter. Does Anna need someone with all these health complications in her life when it's already so chaotic. Wish the court case was over. luv jada
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Short chapter. Does Anna need someone with all these health complications in her life when it's already so chaotic. Wish the court case was over. luv jada
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Wow, what a turn of events. Thank goodness there is a vaccine now. When I first started in healthcare, there wasn't. Well written and emotional chapter. Hope you are feeling well~Debbie
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Wow, what a turn of events. Thank goodness there is a vaccine now. When I first started in healthcare, there wasn't. Well written and emotional chapter. Hope you are feeling well~Debbie
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
Oh my, how do you think up all this kind of stuff...now I have to wait ans see what is going to happen in the courtroom so to say. Have a great week. God bless.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Oh my, how do you think up all this kind of stuff...now I have to wait ans see what is going to happen in the courtroom so to say. Have a great week. God bless.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I was so afraid Anna would run and refuse to let Troy explain his illness to her. I was relieved when she listened to him explain he was no threat to her of Michael. Brown does play dirty and he may even more up his sleeve that will be harmful to Anna's case. This is an excellent chapter and I was sad when it ended! Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I was so afraid Anna would run and refuse to let Troy explain his illness to her. I was relieved when she listened to him explain he was no threat to her of Michael. Brown does play dirty and he may even more up his sleeve that will be harmful to Anna's case. This is an excellent chapter and I was sad when it ended! Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
You convey characters' emotions well in this chapter, both by their actions and in their dialogue.
Troy's explanation of his hepatitis is excellent as is his explanation of how it has and has not impacted his life :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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You convey characters' emotions well in this chapter, both by their actions and in their dialogue.
Troy's explanation of his hepatitis is excellent as is his explanation of how it has and has not impacted his life :-) Brooke
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
chapter thirty-eight in your book Lonely Hearts Meet is wonderfully written. Your dialogue is superb and drives the story along. Your descriptive writing is excellent in this chapter. We star off where you left us dangling with Paul objecting to the tactics the defense is underhandedness doing. Judge Sawyer call both lawyers into his chambers. Anna needed Troy's reassurance. Troy explains how he acquired Hepatitis B as a kid. I'm happy Anna heard him out. May times folks allow ignorance dictate their actions. The defense lawyer is a slimy bastard. I love your short chapter and I can't wait to read more. Your doing a super job with this story, my friend. Please have a blessed day. I'd recommend this chapter to other readers. Your fan and friend...Melissa.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Barbara,
chapter thirty-eight in your book Lonely Hearts Meet is wonderfully written. Your dialogue is superb and drives the story along. Your descriptive writing is excellent in this chapter. We star off where you left us dangling with Paul objecting to the tactics the defense is underhandedness doing. Judge Sawyer call both lawyers into his chambers. Anna needed Troy's reassurance. Troy explains how he acquired Hepatitis B as a kid. I'm happy Anna heard him out. May times folks allow ignorance dictate their actions. The defense lawyer is a slimy bastard. I love your short chapter and I can't wait to read more. Your doing a super job with this story, my friend. Please have a blessed day. I'd recommend this chapter to other readers. Your fan and friend...Melissa.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and constant support. I appreciate both.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
I enjoyed reading this latest chapter in the saga of Anna and Troy and there are just a few small changes to recommend ...
* You have - or I'll fine all of you with contempt of court. I suggest - fine all of you for contempt of court.
* You have - Her hand covered mouth. I suggest - Her hand covered her mouth.
* You have - When Troy got off him motorcycle ... I suggest - When Troy got off his mkotor-cycle ....
* You have - You better talk fast. I suggest - You had better talk fast.
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
I enjoyed reading this latest chapter in the saga of Anna and Troy and there are just a few small changes to recommend ...
* You have - or I'll fine all of you with contempt of court. I suggest - fine all of you for contempt of court.
* You have - Her hand covered mouth. I suggest - Her hand covered her mouth.
* You have - When Troy got off him motorcycle ... I suggest - When Troy got off his mkotor-cycle ....
* You have - You better talk fast. I suggest - You had better talk fast.
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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I will make the necessary changes. Thank you for the kind review.