Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Mara del Mar
You have done scenes very vivid in the court, shows great mastery on theme. I wait that all is well, because Paul is a brilliant lawyer. Congratulations, a excellent chapter.
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You have done scenes very vivid in the court, shows great mastery on theme. I wait that all is well, because Paul is a brilliant lawyer. Congratulations, a excellent chapter.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Fantastic work. I was on the edge of my seat....and hoping it was all going to work out.
Great flow and plot work on the scene.
I loved it, didn't see anything that stood out for me...was a wonderful and rich read...
Great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Fantastic work. I was on the edge of my seat....and hoping it was all going to work out.
Great flow and plot work on the scene.
I loved it, didn't see anything that stood out for me...was a wonderful and rich read...
Great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Liking what you write is a given. This is the second novel of yours that I've read/reading. However, I find your author's notes as equally interesting; more important they are informative and help others. Excellent work, and no I do not feel you are going to fast in this.
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Liking what you write is a given. This is the second novel of yours that I've read/reading. However, I find your author's notes as equally interesting; more important they are informative and help others. Excellent work, and no I do not feel you are going to fast in this.
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
Hi, Barbara. Things are looking up. Anna is right about these kind of people they don't give up. They do awful things and take revenge on those who fight back. It is too bad, but there are people like this. Good story. You might try to show or tell us why some men were watching them. It comes right before this statement "So those two aren't stalkers?" For some reason, this part puzzled me. Also why did Anna look at Troy's hands before allowing him to assist her?
April
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Hi, Barbara. Things are looking up. Anna is right about these kind of people they don't give up. They do awful things and take revenge on those who fight back. It is too bad, but there are people like this. Good story. You might try to show or tell us why some men were watching them. It comes right before this statement "So those two aren't stalkers?" For some reason, this part puzzled me. Also why did Anna look at Troy's hands before allowing him to assist her?
April
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
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So far it's just a feeling Troy has. We don't really know for sure, do we? Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from JW
This new addition is another excellent chapter. It was written very lifelike and your style makes it very easily for the reader to mentally picture the scene before them
Great job! JW
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This new addition is another excellent chapter. It was written very lifelike and your style makes it very easily for the reader to mentally picture the scene before them
Great job! JW
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where all of the machinations of bobby's mother came out in court and turned things in anna's favor. i enjoyed reading it.
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this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where all of the machinations of bobby's mother came out in court and turned things in anna's favor. i enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
Sawyer threaten to take Brown - threatened
what his client was up too - to
Poor Anna, even when things go her way she always has that looming threat of what will happen after Bobby gets out
Excellent scene in court
Brooke :-)
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Sawyer threaten to take Brown - threatened
what his client was up too - to
Poor Anna, even when things go her way she always has that looming threat of what will happen after Bobby gets out
Excellent scene in court
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the eagle eye. I missed the ed on threatened in the last post too. Darn.
Comment from c_lucas
The evil doers have been stop, but I agree with Anna, "It's not over." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
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The evil doers have been stop, but I agree with Anna, "It's not over." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie