Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Oh boy tender moments and then fierce reaction from Anna over the phone call and that woman's voice.

I liked the fact that she picked up the phone again and screamed her frustrations. It showed that she has gained some spunk and inner self power to lead her life her way.
Great job on this chapter.

Well penned and nothing stood out for me as needing looked at. Now I am on pins and needles to see that Troy is OK.

Thanks for a great chapter, always a pleasure reading your work.
Maureen

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

The romantic in me was hoping they would kiss and fall passionately in love, but they did what was right, waiting until things settle and Anna has recovered~Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from AlexAX

Excellent

Many people will be able to relate to the book you are writing. This is the first chapter I have read and you have made me want to read the rest. Very intrigued as to why she is getting phone calls like that when she said she is divorced. Alex.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

Short, but it conveys the story at this point very well, I suspect she's about to get a visit from Bobby or tht Booby has set up Troy for a hit. Hopefully the lady will call the police and have the call traced.

Equally hopefully, your police in the story will respond in time!

Nicely done.

Patrick

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from emmaysavage

Excellent

This was an important chapter, well written. It is good to have this clarity about the relationship. The way you have set up the next part of the story works well.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Now that we're beginning to see Anna's natural mother-bear instincts coming to the surface, the bullies had better beware. A hair-raising chapter with your usual fine crafting, barbara. Kind regards, Bev

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by Writingfundimension on 22-Jan-2012

You're welcome, barbara

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job writing this chapter where anna makes a move on troy and discovers strength within herself. then she gets a phone call that upsets her.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Oh, a threatening phone call - that is the last thing she needs, and then that damned loud muffler again. Certainly makes me wonder if the alarm at Troy's work was triggered as a diversion.
I love her attitude in the final line. That is the Anna she needs to be. :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Anna is going to be in trouble shortly. An assault? That's why the alarm went off at Troy's work. To get her aone. Well written, Barbara. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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Comment from cce29

Excellent

I haven't read any other parts of the book you have put on the site...I am just now a member. But what I read makes me want to read from the start of the book. I'm glad you are writing about some thing that can help help people. I can't see a thing with this part that id change.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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