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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from
cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
It seems Anna's parents (especially her dad) can't forgive her for marrying Bobby. He sounds like a person who has no forgiveness in his soul...that too would classify as a sin. Poor Anna, it seems her troubles aren't over after all. I hope there is no one in Bobby's family that would do her harm. So in that sense it's a good thing that Paul and Everett want to make her apartment safer for her. She would be even safer if she m moved in with Margaret. I am glad you posted another chapter today! Well done.....blessings, chey
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
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c_lucas
It would seem that some men have a monopoly on stubborness. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Very good job.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
I would say most men have a monopoly on stubborness. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 25-Jun-2012
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