Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "part two, Chapter 22"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I will miss this, but am so glad you are branching out into something new. I look forward to your posts each week and really do think you have increased awareness of spousal abuse with this one!!! I tried to give you a six for finishing this, but the powers that be won't let me. It surely deserves one !!! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I will miss this, but am so glad you are branching out into something new. I look forward to your posts each week and really do think you have increased awareness of spousal abuse with this one!!! I tried to give you a six for finishing this, but the powers that be won't let me. It surely deserves one !!! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I know FS does that to me all the time. I fully understand and just glad you liked the story. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from guinea
This is an excellent book. I have beenfollowing it closely. I look forward to more of your work. Shows deep thinking and fine talent.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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This is an excellent book. I have beenfollowing it closely. I look forward to more of your work. Shows deep thinking and fine talent.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Misrael
I have read a few of these but have also missed alot as well. But I have found it to be very interesting anyway. Good read and good job.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I have read a few of these but have also missed alot as well. But I have found it to be very interesting anyway. Good read and good job.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iria
I really liked this story because of the significant message you a sending the reader. I also liked the flow of the story. It is also well written.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I really liked this story because of the significant message you a sending the reader. I also liked the flow of the story. It is also well written.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your kind review,
Comment from Janie King
This is the end of the book? It's a lovely ending ..one that leads the reader to know it will take time to heal but that healing will take place and a happier life is ahead. God bless.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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This is the end of the book? It's a lovely ending ..one that leads the reader to know it will take time to heal but that healing will take place and a happier life is ahead. God bless.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I needed to give women hope, yet it takes time. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbara,
This was a touching way to resolve the family conflict; even the puritanical may have good motives and the worldly may be moral. I found two little spag; "gentleman to comprise me...", should be to comprimise...", "desert" should be dessert. Otherwise a fine write with a touching ending.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Dear Barbara,
This was a touching way to resolve the family conflict; even the puritanical may have good motives and the worldly may be moral. I found two little spag; "gentleman to comprise me...", should be to comprimise...", "desert" should be dessert. Otherwise a fine write with a touching ending.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I must have been making those changes while you were reading. I will double check in case I forgot to save. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Another good chapter, Barbara!
He's too much of a gentleman to comprise (compromise?) me
Time past (passed) before Paul came in and sat down
A few moments passed,(no comma) before Abner stood and put his arms around his daughter
Remember when you asked me which restaurant I wanted to go too (to) and I didn't have any idea?
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Another good chapter, Barbara!
He's too much of a gentleman to comprise (compromise?) me
Time past (passed) before Paul came in and sat down
A few moments passed,(no comma) before Abner stood and put his arms around his daughter
Remember when you asked me which restaurant I wanted to go too (to) and I didn't have any idea?
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I have made those changes. I bet while you were reading. I will double check in case I forget to click save. Thank you for your eagle eye.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Well done, Barbara. It's no easy feat, finishing a novel. You've done it. This was a lovely ending, with Troy and Anna planning a future together as a family. After some misunderstanding with the parents, it seems like that has all been sorted as well.
You should be very proud. I look forward to reading your next venture!
Hugs, Av.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Well done, Barbara. It's no easy feat, finishing a novel. You've done it. This was a lovely ending, with Troy and Anna planning a future together as a family. After some misunderstanding with the parents, it seems like that has all been sorted as well.
You should be very proud. I look forward to reading your next venture!
Hugs, Av.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I should start the next novel on Sunday.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Great final post Barbara. I like how you ended this one. Anna sticking up for herself. As well as Troy standing up for her to her father. This has a strong ending and bright future.
Perfectly penned, I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for sharing a great novel. I look forward to reading your next one.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Great final post Barbara. I like how you ended this one. Anna sticking up for herself. As well as Troy standing up for her to her father. This has a strong ending and bright future.
Perfectly penned, I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for sharing a great novel. I look forward to reading your next one.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from purrfect tale
This was a lovely way to end your story. The two families united and Anna wanting a year to discover who she alone and by inference, who she and Troy are as a couple.
He's too much of a gentleman to (compromise) me.
A few moments passed, before Abner stood - comma not needed here
"I couldn't decide if you should hold Michael or Anna. I finally decided you should." This is confusing. In the 1st sentence, the word 'or' suggests she meant he should be holding one or the other of them. So the second sentence made me think, "Decided what?" Even continuing with the sentence about Troy's arm being around Anna, is that what was meant earlier about him holding her? Or is he holding the baby with his arm around Anna?
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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This was a lovely way to end your story. The two families united and Anna wanting a year to discover who she alone and by inference, who she and Troy are as a couple.
He's too much of a gentleman to (compromise) me.
A few moments passed, before Abner stood - comma not needed here
"I couldn't decide if you should hold Michael or Anna. I finally decided you should." This is confusing. In the 1st sentence, the word 'or' suggests she meant he should be holding one or the other of them. So the second sentence made me think, "Decided what?" Even continuing with the sentence about Troy's arm being around Anna, is that what was meant earlier about him holding her? Or is he holding the baby with his arm around Anna?
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your eagle eye. I will make the corrections.