Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

To deepwater,
This is a very in depth and emotional piece of work illustrating the bravery and sacrifice that is done, {then and now} All hoping that their death will bring us our freedom.
Charlene

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

thank you Charlene I do to

Gary

Comment from Kausar_Javeria

Excellent

Hello there~!
Another amazing poem has been added to an amazing compilation of poetry. I do enjoy reading and pondering over your writings from the heart. This is a well-written poem and a beautiful dedication to Pam indeed.
Great Job!

JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)

(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from SilverWoulfCreations

Excellent

I greatly enjoyed the sad poem! Horrors that Await those in the forefront of war are unfathomable and weigh heavy on many hearts... My prayers always go out to the men and women who fight for one cause or another during such battles. Thank you for sharing it was greatly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Your poem touched my heart. If I am not mistaken, wasn't WWI the ware that was supposed to end all wars? I'm not great with history. I pray for world peace.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

it was the war to end all wars, thanks for reading

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

The sounds of war and the inner
feelings that lay hidden beneath
artistically and dramatically
expressed in poetic verse.
Well done

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from BLACKDYKE

Excellent

Poynient and real gw and perfect for
the subjectivity. It tells us the tale
as it was and with feeling. I am seeing
so many war poems up today. Eric

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

thanks Eric

reply by BLACKDYKE on 01-Aug-2014

My pleasure

Comment from Genya

Excellent

This is a very sad poem but also very true as to what war is all about. Lots of imagery and deep feelings in your work. There were some very emotional parts in particular Tomorrow will bring the same as today with less of my brothers beside.... this really brings it home to everyone. Very moving poem with a good accompanying picture. Genya

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

Thank you Genya

Comment from lappmellott

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem and I love the picture you chose to accompany it. It is so appropriate, to say the least. I wish the wars in this world would soon end and people could learn to live peacefully with each other. Great poem.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

Thank you

reply by lappmellott on 01-Aug-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from Bryan G

Excellent

Great poem. Your poem reminded me of the image of Scottish soldiers going "over the top" wearing their kilts with the lead man punting a soccer ball towards the enemy trenches. Punting towards the cross is more like it. Will we ever fight the war to truly end all wars? I hope so.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

We never know when our day will come. We mourn the loss of our friends, yet who knows when we will be called home?
This is so beautifully written and deeply touching. If this is for Gunglalo, you have expressed our loss very well. Wish I had a six left for this one.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014

Thank you