Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

I liked this poem that speaks of awakening and the confusion of a dream and how difficult it is to remember what we dreamt. This poem is well penned and has a nice flow to it. I like this sonnet very much. Well done. -January L.

 Comment Written 20-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thanks, January. I always appreciate your comments. It's good of you to drop by and review. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

This is brilliant Tony, I read it to my wife and she was most impressed, if I was a judge in this contest, although there have been many poems entered, yours is the best by a margin. The maestro of metaphor, the Sanivite of simile, well done, a brilliant poem Tony, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thanks, Roy. I always appreciate your comments. It's good of you to drop a sixth star on this. Most affirming. Perhaps I'll summon up the courage to read it to my wife, too. She can be a harsh critic! All good wishes, Tony

reply by royowen on 20-May-2020

Poor Tony, my wife keeps me grounded

Comment from Manh C Dang

Excellent

This is a delightful poem, full of dreams and reality and somewhere in between! It's kind of fun, lighthearted but there is a touch of seriousness in this poem as well.

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 Comment Written 20-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thanks, Manh. I appreciate your comments. It's good of you to drop by and review. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Excellent

This was beautiful and well written. I think you did realy well with the rhyme and the meter of this particular sonnet. Thanks for sharing it, and keep up the good writing.

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 Comment Written 20-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thanks, Amanda. I always appreciate your comments. It's good of you to drop by and review. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Exceptional

Dear T F, I gladly rate this one with six-stars.
It does not even need the exotic illustration
You selected to recreate in my mind the images
You saw in your dreams.

 Comment Written 20-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thank you so much for your review, Suzanna, and the affirmation of a sixth star. Much appreciated, as are your kind words. Best wishes, Tony