Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Reflecting"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from equestrik
I like the peaceful feel of this and can identify with having a peaceful place to go to where a person can reflect and ponder life and the past. The picture is perfect for the write.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I like the peaceful feel of this and can identify with having a peaceful place to go to where a person can reflect and ponder life and the past. The picture is perfect for the write.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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equestrik, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses two meanings for reflect to shows where you choose to go through your memories.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This poem uses two meanings for reflect to shows where you choose to go through your memories.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Joan, thank you for the time to spent to read, review and comment on my poem. May you be well and may you find unimaginable Joys in your life.
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You're most welcome. Same to you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Writer. Your image and 25 syllables are a perfect match. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery and a strong message. I could see this man thinking back to past days and wondering about the future.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Writer. Your image and 25 syllables are a perfect match. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery and a strong message. I could see this man thinking back to past days and wondering about the future.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Jan, thank you for the time spent reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem. May you be well and may you find unimaginable Joys in your life.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Good job of supplying a poignant message while sticking to the contest rules of exactly 25 syllables. Yes, I counted them just to be fair. I love the picture you chose to go along with the piece. It adds much to the ambiance of the inspiring message. This is lifting and has meaning beyond and in between the lines. Reflecting while viewing your own reflection in the water surrounding you, as you go on a nature walk, is very compelling. I feel uplifted and good about myself as I imagine me on a hiking trip in the wilderness. Thank you for sharing your experience.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Good job of supplying a poignant message while sticking to the contest rules of exactly 25 syllables. Yes, I counted them just to be fair. I love the picture you chose to go along with the piece. It adds much to the ambiance of the inspiring message. This is lifting and has meaning beyond and in between the lines. Reflecting while viewing your own reflection in the water surrounding you, as you go on a nature walk, is very compelling. I feel uplifted and good about myself as I imagine me on a hiking trip in the wilderness. Thank you for sharing your experience.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Jesse, thank you for the time spent reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem. May you be well and may you find unimaginable Joys in your life.
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You're welcome.
I am wheelchair bound, but have high hopes of walking with just a cane after I have the repairative surgery on my lower back by my surgeon whom I trust. Then I will set out to find the joys in my life. Thank you for caring, and your well wishes.
Jesse
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May your recovery be full and speedy!
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Thank you so much. I hope so too!
Jesse
Comment from QC Poet
Excellently composed 25 syllable count compliant entry with Great subject matter on a self reflection moment. Reviewing our past helps us focus on the future. Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Excellently composed 25 syllable count compliant entry with Great subject matter on a self reflection moment. Reviewing our past helps us focus on the future. Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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QC Poet, thank you for the time spent to read, review, and comment on my poem. May you be well and may you find unimaginable Joys in your life.
Comment from gramalot8
This is well written within the parameters of the 25 syllable required for the contest. I hope you do well.
It is easy to get lost in our reflections while out enjoying our wonderful natural resources.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This is well written within the parameters of the 25 syllable required for the contest. I hope you do well.
It is easy to get lost in our reflections while out enjoying our wonderful natural resources.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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gramalot, thank you for the time to spent to readm review and comment on my poem. May you be well and may you find unimaginable Joys in your life.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,..
I still stand often in
this mountain stream
catching my reflection,
while reflecting upon
bygone days...
Great job!!!!
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Dear author,..
I still stand often in
this mountain stream
catching my reflection,
while reflecting upon
bygone days...
Great job!!!!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Anne-Marie, thank you for the time to spent to readm review and comment on my poem. May you be well and may you find unimaginable Joys in your life.