Comment from rhymer1

Excellent

beating so loud - loudly, but I admit, loud reads betterly.

In a skew way, this reminds me of a scene in Moonstruck However, it is is nothing like it except that it involves a proposal in a restaurant and patron applause.

Slainte, rhymer1

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, rhymer...Also she wasn't in a wheelchair in "Moonstruck" LOL..Bob

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

You can write quite the romantic story, young Bob. I loved this story. It is full of love and emotion. The twist at the end was sensational. Shows you, beauty lies within.
Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Luv jada

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Jada. I appreciate your review and dyour comments...Bob

Comment from Pacinogal

Exceptional

Hi Bob,

This story is exceptional. How romantic.

I enjoy the way you write. It has a flair.

"Her smile challenged the tears forming in her

eyes." Exceptional post.

Kindly,
Kathy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Awwww. thanks, Kathy. I truly appreciate your kind review and all of your comments...XX Bob

reply by Pacinogal on 10-Feb-2010

You're so welcome Bob.
Kindly, Kathy

Comment from Kathryn Varuzza

Excellent

Bob,
This is beautiful!
A great romantic love story.
Wonderful descriptions.
Good dialogue.
Entertaining.
Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Katie

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Thanks, Katie...I haven't forgotten about your book. I have it pending in my file...just on vacation and not really doing that much reviewing until I get back thanks so much, Bob

reply by Kathryn Varuzza on 10-Feb-2010

You're welcome. Enjoy your vacation.
Katie

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

I love your romantic story and the accolade for your wife, Lynie in the Author's notes. Your story and dialog was well-written. I liked the little twist at the end. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Thank you, gypsycaravan. What a sweet person you must be... Bob

Comment from words

Excellent

Such a beautiful and tender love story.

A man in love is truly a wondrous sight to behold.

Thank you for allowing this peak into your most romantic heart.

I know that everyone wants to be loved and cherished like this.

A great love story.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Thank you, Diane. You are such a sweetheart, yourself...Bob

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

This made my eyes moist with tenderness, love and deep respect for the man who feels this way about his spouse. No spag. Spectacular imagery and just a lovely, lovely story. ann

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010

Thanks so much, Ann. I am so glad you liked it...Bob