Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Her life she must endure"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from cheyennewy
Hi GW,
Ranching can be so hard, especially for the woman. But if she chose that life she must endure some hardships. Most ranches aren't close to any other so seeing neighbors everyday is most likely out of the question. You wrote this poem well, with a nice rhyme that is lilting. Well done.....chey
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Hi GW,
Ranching can be so hard, especially for the woman. But if she chose that life she must endure some hardships. Most ranches aren't close to any other so seeing neighbors everyday is most likely out of the question. You wrote this poem well, with a nice rhyme that is lilting. Well done.....chey
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Chey for reading
Comment from c_lucas
Ranching is a lonely life and requires much from the woman as much from the male. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Ranching is a lonely life and requires much from the woman as much from the male. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you C
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You're welcome, Gary.
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi deepwater. I enjoyed reading about cowgirls and the lives they lead now and in the past. The artwork is pretty too. Well done
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Hi deepwater. I enjoyed reading about cowgirls and the lives they lead now and in the past. The artwork is pretty too. Well done
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Wendy
Comment from knowledge
You are just an ol' poet bard are you not. Your poems here display a lot of emotion and thought. I enjoy reading your works.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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You are just an ol' poet bard are you not. Your poems here display a lot of emotion and thought. I enjoy reading your works.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Thanks again Knowledge, It just pops into my head sometimes
Comment from Black-Saphire
This was simply outstanding! You are an excellent writer, and i really enjoyed this poem. I liked how it told a story inside of it and still kept up the flow and emotion in it. Good job,
-Jade
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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This was simply outstanding! You are an excellent writer, and i really enjoyed this poem. I liked how it told a story inside of it and still kept up the flow and emotion in it. Good job,
-Jade
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Jade
Comment from Joan E.
I'm going to have to call you Mr. Prolific--your muse is working overtime recently. I enjoyed your description of how this girl has left behind her "fancy ways." (I don't thing "cowgirls" needs the apostrophe in line one.) The picture you chose to illustrate your poem is perfect.
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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I'm going to have to call you Mr. Prolific--your muse is working overtime recently. I enjoyed your description of how this girl has left behind her "fancy ways." (I don't thing "cowgirls" needs the apostrophe in line one.) The picture you chose to illustrate your poem is perfect.
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Joan for reading and the comment GW
Comment from fictionwriter
What true cowgirl ever has enjoyed pearls and Lace? I don't know that she was a cowgirl, but has become one. Us real cowgirls enjoy our jeans and tshirt, and would rather be aboard a horse than anything. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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What true cowgirl ever has enjoyed pearls and Lace? I don't know that she was a cowgirl, but has become one. Us real cowgirls enjoy our jeans and tshirt, and would rather be aboard a horse than anything. Great job.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thanks for the comments Fictionwriter am on a horse most weekends at the ranch, got some longhorns to..smiling GW
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Oh cool. My horse loves herding cows, his favorite thing. Too bad we don't do much of that anymore. best wishes to you.
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your welcome GW
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I understand you wrote as a tribute to cowgirls, but I am pretty sure it could be about military spouses too. I am sure other spouses would also identify with it. This is a good well written poem.
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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I understand you wrote as a tribute to cowgirls, but I am pretty sure it could be about military spouses too. I am sure other spouses would also identify with it. This is a good well written poem.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thank you Barbara yes it can be
Comment from Ponder
Hi Deepwater,
I though this was an excellent ode to the death of love's young dream.
A life to endure rather than enjoy, how often that is our fate. I thought this had a sad tone, though there were no inclinations towards regret.
The photo is fantastic.
Jules
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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Hi Deepwater,
I though this was an excellent ode to the death of love's young dream.
A life to endure rather than enjoy, how often that is our fate. I thought this had a sad tone, though there were no inclinations towards regret.
The photo is fantastic.
Jules
Comment Written 26-May-2010
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thanks Jules
Comment from Nicki_Mist
A great tribute to the cowgirls ways of life. For to do all the chores while the man is gone and to take care of the house and children would be a bit over whelming. Great poem with good imagery.
Nice rhythm.
Nicole
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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A great tribute to the cowgirls ways of life. For to do all the chores while the man is gone and to take care of the house and children would be a bit over whelming. Great poem with good imagery.
Nice rhythm.
Nicole
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thanks Nicole for reading