Another Pretty Face
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Comment from lola29
I think Joe and his group are true heroes, and the men holding the girls inside the house are true cowards. This was a riveting chapter, and you did not disappoint.
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I think Joe and his group are true heroes, and the men holding the girls inside the house are true cowards. This was a riveting chapter, and you did not disappoint.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for youre review and support.
Comment from adewpearl
I want to be where Joe and Cassie are? - drop the question mark
reaction team repelled from four helicopters - rappelled
Thank heaven's - drop the apostrophe
Lots of action, danger, suspense and excitement in this chapter, Barbara - and now Joe is captured. You leave your readers wanting more, that's for sure.
Stay well, my friend :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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I want to be where Joe and Cassie are? - drop the question mark
reaction team repelled from four helicopters - rappelled
Thank heaven's - drop the apostrophe
Lots of action, danger, suspense and excitement in this chapter, Barbara - and now Joe is captured. You leave your readers wanting more, that's for sure.
Stay well, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you, once again for your eagle eye and support.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very well written and enjoyable. You are in my thoughts and prayers. I am so glad other writers are helping you out. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Very well written and enjoyable. You are in my thoughts and prayers. I am so glad other writers are helping you out. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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It amazing how big of a family FS is. I never expected the out pouring of so much love. Thank you for yoru thoughts and prayers.
Comment from bowls
So glad to see the next posting. I've been thinking of you and hoping that all is going well. Best of luck on Thursday with your next treatment.
This was a really exciting chapter. We know that Sara and Joe love one another, but the question now is: will they ever see one another again. So many obstacles seem to come between them, yet they do seem to be truly in love with one another. I can't wait for the next chapter! One little thing: THANK HEAVEN'S doesn't need that apostrophe.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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So glad to see the next posting. I've been thinking of you and hoping that all is going well. Best of luck on Thursday with your next treatment.
This was a really exciting chapter. We know that Sara and Joe love one another, but the question now is: will they ever see one another again. So many obstacles seem to come between them, yet they do seem to be truly in love with one another. I can't wait for the next chapter! One little thing: THANK HEAVEN'S doesn't need that apostrophe.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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You must have read that while I was making the correction. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from markk
Excellently written and a great very compelling story. The action in this does keep it going and I'm glad that even if a romance, you have all this action as that keeps it from being just a "boy meets girl and falls in love" story and makes it very exciting. well done. I will also look forward to your chemo essay. Well done on the book and good luck with your chemo!!
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Excellently written and a great very compelling story. The action in this does keep it going and I'm glad that even if a romance, you have all this action as that keeps it from being just a "boy meets girl and falls in love" story and makes it very exciting. well done. I will also look forward to your chemo essay. Well done on the book and good luck with your chemo!!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your support and review. I appreciate both.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, another great chapter that keeps us on our toes and anxious for the next paragraph. Good action and intrigue as always. Looking forward to more.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Barbara, another great chapter that keeps us on our toes and anxious for the next paragraph. Good action and intrigue as always. Looking forward to more.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Connie P
I'm a nervous wreck after reading this! This is more than a porno ring, it's a human trafficking operation. As for the romance, Joe would do what he is doing under any circumstances, but I certainly hope Sara understands how much he cares for her.
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(") extra quotation mark "Let's drop them in the front yard and make sure they're seen
*"Thank Heaven's (heavens?) helicopters are loud or our entrance was just announced."
Thanks for the update. Although you are on my mind often, even when I'm not glued to this site, I try not to ask to much, I'm sure you want some part of your life to remain "normal". I'll look forward to your essay!
Connie
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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I'm a nervous wreck after reading this! This is more than a porno ring, it's a human trafficking operation. As for the romance, Joe would do what he is doing under any circumstances, but I certainly hope Sara understands how much he cares for her.
Note:*
(") extra quotation mark "Let's drop them in the front yard and make sure they're seen
*"Thank Heaven's (heavens?) helicopters are loud or our entrance was just announced."
Thanks for the update. Although you are on my mind often, even when I'm not glued to this site, I try not to ask to much, I'm sure you want some part of your life to remain "normal". I'll look forward to your essay!
Connie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your eagle eye, I will get right on those errors.
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You're very welcome!!!
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is a wonderful story and as always I can't wait to read more but I have to. You are still in my prayers and I wish you a speey recovery.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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This is a wonderful story and as always I can't wait to read more but I have to. You are still in my prayers and I wish you a speey recovery.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind thoughts and the review.
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
I'm little lost in your story,Barbara. But the chapter flows really well. I found no nits and will go back to the last two to catch up.
Isaiah
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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I'm little lost in your story,Barbara. But the chapter flows really well. I found no nits and will go back to the last two to catch up.
Isaiah
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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I hope you find out where you are lost at, if not PM me and I will try to answer your questions.
Comment from ejebb1951
Angels blessing an angel. How blessed more blessed can you be? A romance between Sara and Joe and I can feel her love for her man. He knows she loves Cassie and wants her life full with him and Cassie. That's real love and I am on edge. I need more. I love it.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Angels blessing an angel. How blessed more blessed can you be? A romance between Sara and Joe and I can feel her love for her man. He knows she loves Cassie and wants her life full with him and Cassie. That's real love and I am on edge. I need more. I love it.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support. I appreciate both.
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You are so welcome barbara.