Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from pickthorn
Congratulations on completing your school term. You have what it takes to overcome cancer or anything else that comes your way.
This is an interesting story you have here. I'm anxious to see if Troy finds Anna and begins a close relationship.
reply by the author on 29-May-2011
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Congratulations on completing your school term. You have what it takes to overcome cancer or anything else that comes your way.
This is an interesting story you have here. I'm anxious to see if Troy finds Anna and begins a close relationship.
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
I admire Troy's diligence in trying to find Anna. I'm now wondering what drove her to get hooked up with a jerk like Bobby in the first place.
Congrats on your school year finishing up, you're amazing to have even tried to stick out the year.
Connie
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I admire Troy's diligence in trying to find Anna. I'm now wondering what drove her to get hooked up with a jerk like Bobby in the first place.
Congrats on your school year finishing up, you're amazing to have even tried to stick out the year.
Connie
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from MS Writer
Congratulations on your persistence and bravery.
I love reading this story because it is so realistic and there is hope that for abused women everywhere there is someone who can and will help them. Great read.
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Congratulations on your persistence and bravery.
I love reading this story because it is so realistic and there is hope that for abused women everywhere there is someone who can and will help them. Great read.
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Well done, you've proved you got what it takes to beat the cancer and proved the doom mongers wrong.
This is a clever chapter, Troy's fisihng expedition obviously paid off.
Patrick
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Hi Barbara,
Well done, you've proved you got what it takes to beat the cancer and proved the doom mongers wrong.
This is a clever chapter, Troy's fisihng expedition obviously paid off.
Patrick
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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We shall see if it pays off or not. Thank you for your kind reivew.
Comment from missyvamp
shows such promise as a romance story, and also the message about abusive relationships...loved the pic, it says it all!
If I may ask...were you yourself abused or were close to someone who was? You seem to know a lot about it...but of course you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
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shows such promise as a romance story, and also the message about abusive relationships...loved the pic, it says it all!
If I may ask...were you yourself abused or were close to someone who was? You seem to know a lot about it...but of course you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What drive you have, Barbara... keeping
good time at school, in spite of all
you've been through.
A great chapter, my friend.
Troy paused(,) waiting
she told me(,) she would
MArgaret
reply by the author on 29-May-2011
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What drive you have, Barbara... keeping
good time at school, in spite of all
you've been through.
A great chapter, my friend.
Troy paused(,) waiting
she told me(,) she would
MArgaret
Comment Written 29-May-2011
reply by the author on 29-May-2011
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I will work on those commas. I can't seem to get them right. Thank you for your review and support.
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It was a great chapter, most enjoyable. M x
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Congratulations on toughing out the year. I know it hasn't been easy.
If Troy can find Anna, so can her husband. I'm guessing he'll have to wait until she reaches out to him or his father. Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy
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Congratulations on toughing out the year. I know it hasn't been easy.
If Troy can find Anna, so can her husband. I'm guessing he'll have to wait until she reaches out to him or his father. Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I have a feeling Anna is very well hidden.
Comment from Shirley McLain
A great chapter as always. I like the fact Mr. Whitman is going out of his way to help this woman. Now I'm very curious about what will happen with her parents. I'm happy you got through school. I know at times it had to be a struggle. God Bless.
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A great chapter as always. I like the fact Mr. Whitman is going out of his way to help this woman. Now I'm very curious about what will happen with her parents. I'm happy you got through school. I know at times it had to be a struggle. God Bless.
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I will use the summer to take break and get all my strength back, hopefully.,
Comment from Chris Tee
Another piece of pure enjoyment and mixed feelings to me!!
You are so brave to give us further pleasant reads and show to me great character with your courage. We are praying for you at my poets society in South Africa.
I salute you girl!!
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Another piece of pure enjoyment and mixed feelings to me!!
You are so brave to give us further pleasant reads and show to me great character with your courage. We are praying for you at my poets society in South Africa.
I salute you girl!!
Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for yoru kind review and support. I know the prayers have helped.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barabara, another intriguing read, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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Barabara, another intriguing read, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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Comment Written 29-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.