Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Part two, Chapter 8"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Cumbrianlass
Yet another solid write for you, Barbara. Well done. I am following Anna's story with mounting interest. Good dialogue and feeling.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Yet another solid write for you, Barbara. Well done. I am following Anna's story with mounting interest. Good dialogue and feeling.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from glpar
I'm glad to see this story continuing in a positive way. Yes she can do it and if she continues to use those words as her mantra she will. Well done.
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I'm glad to see this story continuing in a positive way. Yes she can do it and if she continues to use those words as her mantra she will. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
I read this closely for SPAG, but found none. Your novel is developing nicely. You leave the reader in a place that allows for open questions. She still has some doubts, but she also has courage, wanting to get on with it. Until the reader gets to the next chapter, though, he/she will not know for sure which will win out.
Good job.
Jay
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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I read this closely for SPAG, but found none. Your novel is developing nicely. You leave the reader in a place that allows for open questions. She still has some doubts, but she also has courage, wanting to get on with it. Until the reader gets to the next chapter, though, he/she will not know for sure which will win out.
Good job.
Jay
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
Comment from quashdog
One element of an abusive relationship is controlling basic decision making. That is the tactic that Booby used on Anna and that is why she acts like an adolescent leaving home for the first time. This was interesnting and it reinforces Anna's handicap in her trying to make a life away from her former spouse.
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One element of an abusive relationship is controlling basic decision making. That is the tactic that Booby used on Anna and that is why she acts like an adolescent leaving home for the first time. This was interesnting and it reinforces Anna's handicap in her trying to make a life away from her former spouse.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the insight and kind review.
Comment from rheabug
This is another good chapter in this ongoing series. The message of abuse is so important to spread. Knowing what these women have to go through to obtain the safety that they seek.
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This is another good chapter in this ongoing series. The message of abuse is so important to spread. Knowing what these women have to go through to obtain the safety that they seek.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara. Everything seems smooth and okay it makes me wonder what comes next. But I trust you would continue to give Anna the life she deserves ... :) (This story comes out all right. Happy holidays.)
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Hi, Barbara. Everything seems smooth and okay it makes me wonder what comes next. But I trust you would continue to give Anna the life she deserves ... :) (This story comes out all right. Happy holidays.)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
You're working while on your vacation! What I read was interesting. Are dividing your chapters into small posting parts or is this a whole chapter? It looks like she's getting a lot of help. Hopefully, she will be safe in the new apartment. Good writing, Barbara.
April
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You're working while on your vacation! What I read was interesting. Are dividing your chapters into small posting parts or is this a whole chapter? It looks like she's getting a lot of help. Hopefully, she will be safe in the new apartment. Good writing, Barbara.
April
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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This is the second part of one chapter. There is at least one more post, maybe two. I appreciate your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ....
Your story is unfolding well, filled with people who care and understand the plight of Anna and her young son Michael.
This is well written and easy to read. Now, of course, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Hullo Barbara ....
Your story is unfolding well, filled with people who care and understand the plight of Anna and her young son Michael.
This is well written and easy to read. Now, of course, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lola29
Excellent chapter, as usual. I have an uneasy feeling that Bobby will do something unethical, whether it's trying to harm Anna or destroy her furnishings. I wish someone like Hulk Hogan were with her.
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Excellent chapter, as usual. I have an uneasy feeling that Bobby will do something unethical, whether it's trying to harm Anna or destroy her furnishings. I wish someone like Hulk Hogan were with her.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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So do I. Bobby will be heard from again. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from WilliamDeen
"I doubt it, probably Bobby. / if he doubts it, then how come he says probably Bobby. You should probably say, "I am not sure, maybe Bobby?
Great chapter to add to the overall story. I really enjoy your writing.
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"I doubt it, probably Bobby. / if he doubts it, then how come he says probably Bobby. You should probably say, "I am not sure, maybe Bobby?
Great chapter to add to the overall story. I really enjoy your writing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Good suggestion. I will change it. Thank you for the kind review.