Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Connie P
I'm worried about Anna on a number of levels. Her going back to work is dangerous, Bobby and his mother are going to continue to pose a problem. I look forward to how you untangle this mess. Good luck with your new school year!
Connie
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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I'm worried about Anna on a number of levels. Her going back to work is dangerous, Bobby and his mother are going to continue to pose a problem. I look forward to how you untangle this mess. Good luck with your new school year!
Connie
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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I can't wait to see how I untangle this mess, myself??? Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, Barbara.
That Ms Rogers is something else! This read was very enjoyable, and I do hope all will work out well for Anna. The stats you give in your notes are quite amazing. Have a great school year. Lucky first graders to have a teacher like you.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Hello, Barbara.
That Ms Rogers is something else! This read was very enjoyable, and I do hope all will work out well for Anna. The stats you give in your notes are quite amazing. Have a great school year. Lucky first graders to have a teacher like you.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and well wishes.
Comment from lola29
All I can say, is thank God Anna is surrounded by caring, intellgent people, who are providing her and her son with great safety. I hope Mrs. Rodgers gets hit by a bus.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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All I can say, is thank God Anna is surrounded by caring, intellgent people, who are providing her and her son with great safety. I hope Mrs. Rodgers gets hit by a bus.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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I hadn't considered a bus. I wonder how hard that would be to write into a scene? Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Barbara,
You have created a great villain in Ms. Rodgers, excellent character development it makes me anticipate her ruin LOL another well done chapter that keeps me hooked into the story
Blessings
Jenny
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Barbara,
You have created a great villain in Ms. Rodgers, excellent character development it makes me anticipate her ruin LOL another well done chapter that keeps me hooked into the story
Blessings
Jenny
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Very well written, more infor about Paul and his tactics. Anna is blossoming out and standing on her own. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Very well written, more infor about Paul and his tactics. Anna is blossoming out and standing on her own. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Another amazing writing piece.
It has so much within the lines that I have moments when I remind myself I am reading and reviewing a fictional story.
Though of course I know it could be truth.....your style is perfect and the story I love how it is unfolding.
Great job, as always.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Another amazing writing piece.
It has so much within the lines that I have moments when I remind myself I am reading and reviewing a fictional story.
Though of course I know it could be truth.....your style is perfect and the story I love how it is unfolding.
Great job, as always.
Maureen
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
You are doing such a great job of making me hate Bobby's mother. LOL
Since my client has obviously forged his wife's signature, I'll see - I changed a period after signature to a comma
We'll stop at the store and let you chose - choose
Have a great first day of school tomorrow!! :-) Brooke
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You are doing such a great job of making me hate Bobby's mother. LOL
Since my client has obviously forged his wife's signature, I'll see - I changed a period after signature to a comma
We'll stop at the store and let you chose - choose
Have a great first day of school tomorrow!! :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for catching those. They have been taken care of.