Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Part three, Chapter 10"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Just as it sounded like things were getting better, now it seems they are much scarier and far more dangerous. Does such an angry man follow a no-contact order. I feel frighted for Anna and Michael~DEbbie
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Just as it sounded like things were getting better, now it seems they are much scarier and far more dangerous. Does such an angry man follow a no-contact order. I feel frighted for Anna and Michael~DEbbie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Oh, no. The devil is loose to start his tricks. The judge should have locked him away. I guess this can't be done in every case. I loved the progress of the story. You bring out the feelings of angst well.
Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Oh, no. The devil is loose to start his tricks. The judge should have locked him away. I guess this can't be done in every case. I loved the progress of the story. You bring out the feelings of angst well.
Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Bobby is in jail for three months. I don't think you have met his mother, yet. I think you were gone with I introduced her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
Anna's right. Bobby won't be stopped by the courts. He'll do whatever he can to either ruin her life or kill her. Although it wasn't a mistake to divorce him, he would have killed her eventually.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Note:
*dark woodened desk. - dark wooden desk
Connie
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Anna's right. Bobby won't be stopped by the courts. He'll do whatever he can to either ruin her life or kill her. Although it wasn't a mistake to divorce him, he would have killed her eventually.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Note:
*dark woodened desk. - dark wooden desk
Connie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from tango494
I have missed some of the story and will do my best to go back and catch up but this was very well written. As I have told you before I love how well you write dialogues and your narration is amazingly good. Another Awesome job!!!!!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I have missed some of the story and will do my best to go back and catch up but this was very well written. As I have told you before I love how well you write dialogues and your narration is amazingly good. Another Awesome job!!!!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the review and the encouraging words.
Comment from mumsyone
"I see you turned this room into a nursery."
I believe this was already brought out in a previous chapter. Just a suggestion, but it might work better for Anna to say something like, "I love the way you've turned this room into a nursery" (instead of making it sound like it's the first she knew about it). Good chapter, Barbara.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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"I see you turned this room into a nursery."
I believe this was already brought out in a previous chapter. Just a suggestion, but it might work better for Anna to say something like, "I love the way you've turned this room into a nursery" (instead of making it sound like it's the first she knew about it). Good chapter, Barbara.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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It is the first she knew about it. Betty bought a swing and a high chair before, but not a crib. I appreciate your review.
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It was the nursery in question, not the crib, but that's okay.
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nope, didn't mentiion a nursery before.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
WOW! Nicely done. Your characters have shown the right amount of emotion and near the end I was a little worried to.
Well written and great flow. Your imagery even with the characters really creates the evil and danger within the character Bobby.
Enjoyed reading this and where you are at in this story.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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WOW! Nicely done. Your characters have shown the right amount of emotion and near the end I was a little worried to.
Well written and great flow. Your imagery even with the characters really creates the evil and danger within the character Bobby.
Enjoyed reading this and where you are at in this story.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from Gungalo
The law has no teeth to enforce it is decisions. Millions of women face this every day and most fail. It's a crime in and of itself. So sad.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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The law has no teeth to enforce it is decisions. Millions of women face this every day and most fail. It's a crime in and of itself. So sad.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I agree. Thank you for your kind review.
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No problem, girl!!
Comment from robina1978
Had not been able to give you a six star yet. This is for your whole book so far.
It is so good that you attract as much attention for this subject as possible.
Also I think it is great you mention the help line. And the tips in your foot note.
This chapter held my attention once more all the way.
Characters and dialogues so realistic- as if you have been there yourself.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Had not been able to give you a six star yet. This is for your whole book so far.
It is so good that you attract as much attention for this subject as possible.
Also I think it is great you mention the help line. And the tips in your foot note.
This chapter held my attention once more all the way.
Characters and dialogues so realistic- as if you have been there yourself.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I have had one reviewer mention they have used the hot-line. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks life Anna came out ahead of the game. Bobby still remains a threat. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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It looks life Anna came out ahead of the game. Bobby still remains a threat. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie