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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from Gungalo
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So he tells her about it and they are wondering if it will cause them problems. Of course it will but none of then insurmountable!! Reality must not bother the divorce.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Gungalo on 30-Oct-2011
    The story in really taking on a new face.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Poor Troy.. catching
Hepatitis is bad enough,
but at such a young age
is terrible. I hope Anna
doesn't push him away, as
he's a good friend.

Her hand covered (her)mouth

got off him - his

Margaret

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
    Thank you for the kind review and I will make the changes.
Comment from c_lucas
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This story line is coming along nicely. It looks like Troy has got support from Anna. Now just to get Bobby's mother squared away. Good job.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 30-Oct-2011
    You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie