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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from
Gungalo
So he tells her about it and they are wondering if it will cause them problems. Of course it will but none of then insurmountable!! Reality must not bother the divorce.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Gungalo on 30-Oct-2011
The story in really taking on a new face.
Comment from
Margaret Snowdon
Poor Troy.. catching
Hepatitis is bad enough,
but at such a young age
is terrible. I hope Anna
doesn't push him away, as
he's a good friend.
Her hand covered (her)mouth
got off him - his
Margaret
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
Thank you for the kind review and I will make the changes.
Comment from
c_lucas
This story line is coming along nicely. It looks like Troy has got support from Anna. Now just to get Bobby's mother squared away. Good job.
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
Thank you for the kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 30-Oct-2011
You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
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