Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Part three Chapter 13"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from WilliamDeen
I thought it was a good chapter. You are right, every chapter doesn't need a cliff hanger. Some chapters need to be calm and low key, like life is. Every day in real life isn't exciting or dangerous. Thank Goodness!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I thought it was a good chapter. You are right, every chapter doesn't need a cliff hanger. Some chapters need to be calm and low key, like life is. Every day in real life isn't exciting or dangerous. Thank Goodness!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from livingwords
Your writing keeps getting better. Your mix of dialogue is very well balanced and so helpful in conveying your excellent choices. Thank you, also, for your consistent reviews of my posts. This review will get this post Recognized. Dan :))
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Your writing keeps getting better. Your mix of dialogue is very well balanced and so helpful in conveying your excellent choices. Thank you, also, for your consistent reviews of my posts. This review will get this post Recognized. Dan :))
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and your support. I look forward to hearing from you.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Troy is a godsend to this young woman, though he'll have to let her handle things by herself eventually. But for now, it's great that Anna has such a wonderful family looking out for her. Excellent chapter, as usual, barbara. Kind regards, Bev
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Troy is a godsend to this young woman, though he'll have to let her handle things by herself eventually. But for now, it's great that Anna has such a wonderful family looking out for her. Excellent chapter, as usual, barbara. Kind regards, Bev
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, barbara.
Comment from J Patience
Indicating that this is part three of a chapter makes it easier to review properly. You're right, there is no fancy ending, but I did manage to feel the tense relief that Anna experienced coming home alone with her son. Troy was a perfect gentleman, no pressure, a guardian for the mother and son. I already hope they find themselves together further on in the book. You haven't put too much description, just the bare minimum to know what's going on in-between Anna's thoughts and the dialogue. It's a nice, easy read and did end satisfactorily for me. Good luck to Anna, it sounds like she had it rough.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Indicating that this is part three of a chapter makes it easier to review properly. You're right, there is no fancy ending, but I did manage to feel the tense relief that Anna experienced coming home alone with her son. Troy was a perfect gentleman, no pressure, a guardian for the mother and son. I already hope they find themselves together further on in the book. You haven't put too much description, just the bare minimum to know what's going on in-between Anna's thoughts and the dialogue. It's a nice, easy read and did end satisfactorily for me. Good luck to Anna, it sounds like she had it rough.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I personally don't like reading a bunch of descriptions. I think it destracts from the story. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emmaysavage
This is a really needed interval in the story, and emphasizes the characters and their values. I am glad you are not hurrying through crisis after crisis, and I really like the bubble bath.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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This is a really needed interval in the story, and emphasizes the characters and their values. I am glad you are not hurrying through crisis after crisis, and I really like the bubble bath.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I don't know what it is Anna seems very tense.
Good thing she's taking a relaxing bath
I hope she has pleasant dreams..
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Hello Barb
I don't know what it is Anna seems very tense.
Good thing she's taking a relaxing bath
I hope she has pleasant dreams..
Gert
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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She does, but things start heating up again. Thank you for the kind review.
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I figured that unpleasant things for her (in my thoughts0 are going to bring about nasty happenings, again.
Gert
Gert
Comment from Janie King
I think I've picked up on her anxiety..when she heard the sound and deemed it just the baby I had this undercover fear maybe someone had gotten into the house while she was gone. Good chapter and I'm glad it didn't have a hair raising ending, my nerves can only handle so much of that and this basically fiction..can you imagine what I'd be like if it was for real..the thing is..it is real for way too many women and children. Glad you had a great time and I'm glad you're home too. God bless.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I think I've picked up on her anxiety..when she heard the sound and deemed it just the baby I had this undercover fear maybe someone had gotten into the house while she was gone. Good chapter and I'm glad it didn't have a hair raising ending, my nerves can only handle so much of that and this basically fiction..can you imagine what I'd be like if it was for real..the thing is..it is real for way too many women and children. Glad you had a great time and I'm glad you're home too. God bless.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Unfortunately even though this story is fiction, it happens.
Comment from adewpearl
Not every chapter is going to have a cliff hanger - it wouldn't seem like real life. That's the funniest things about soap operas - the characters are always in a state of red alert as if they live no normal days. LOL Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Not every chapter is going to have a cliff hanger - it wouldn't seem like real life. That's the funniest things about soap operas - the characters are always in a state of red alert as if they live no normal days. LOL Brooke :-)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I like that comment. Anna is having a normal day. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving too.
I'm wondering if this last sentence would fit at the end of the last without ****, then move on.
Another good chapter. I'm glad I caught it.
hugs Book
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving too.
I'm wondering if this last sentence would fit at the end of the last without ****, then move on.
Another good chapter. I'm glad I caught it.
hugs Book
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I will recheck that last sentence. Thank you for your kind review.
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How are you doing? How was Thanksgiving?
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Thanksgiving was great, but I am extremely tired. I think it will take me to Christmas to get caught up again. LOL. How are you doing?
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Okay, both Joe and I had a hard year with our jobs. We have none right now, but doing okay, and what do us dumb-asses decide to do? We adopted a puppy. Okay, he's adorable and we love him. In my lap right now, but really, what are we thinking? Just that life's to short to be misrable, and h makes us smile all day long. Please don't stress the holidays, just enjoy.
hugs HEidi
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puppies are so adorable. What kind is he?
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He's a Chihauhau, but I think he may have some Jack Russel in there. He looks more like a russel, but very tiny, and sweet. If you want to see, and you Facebook, freind me and I have videos and pics there. Heidi Tassone
Comment from AprilShower
We didn't need a cliff hanger for this one, Barbara. The whole chapter was intense. The question is will she be safe by herself with the child?
We had a wonderful Thanksgiving, too. Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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We didn't need a cliff hanger for this one, Barbara. The whole chapter was intense. The question is will she be safe by herself with the child?
We had a wonderful Thanksgiving, too. Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
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You're welcome, Barbara.