Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

This was written very well Barbara. I found it flowed well, allowed the reader to remember and catch up on Troy's birth mothers death. Wonderful emotion within this chapter.

And the continued harassments continue. Still keeps the reader attached to the safety of Anna.
Well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Sigh it is one thing after another here isn't it? Is she ever going to have any peace. And poor Paul, to have his medical records pasted across the inter net ... what next?

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Gungalo on 05-Feb-2012

My pleasure.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Keep up the good work.

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

Thank you for the review and the support.

reply by c_lucas on 05-Feb-2012

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie