Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from jjstar
I loved this chapter: pride, arrogance, love, forgiveness -it was all in there. I almost had a conniption fit over the father, but decided in the end he was okay..
Great job-thoroughly enjoyed it!
I was wondering if he knows you in the Biblical sense. --OMG..he said it right out loud??? Shoot, I think I missed the last chapter. I'll finish this review and go do the other one.
You have slandered my home--I wonder if there might be a better word..I know names get slandered..do homes?
. It wouldn't hurt to have more faith in Anna." YAYAYAY FOR TROY!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I loved this chapter: pride, arrogance, love, forgiveness -it was all in there. I almost had a conniption fit over the father, but decided in the end he was okay..
Great job-thoroughly enjoyed it!
I was wondering if he knows you in the Biblical sense. --OMG..he said it right out loud??? Shoot, I think I missed the last chapter. I'll finish this review and go do the other one.
You have slandered my home--I wonder if there might be a better word..I know names get slandered..do homes?
. It wouldn't hurt to have more faith in Anna." YAYAYAY FOR TROY!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I will double check and see if homes can get slandered, good quesion. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Barb I'm so pleased how thing are settled and the relationship between Anna and Troy seem to be less tense
and how Anna and her dad have made amends
Are you saying this is the final chapter?
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Barb I'm so pleased how thing are settled and the relationship between Anna and Troy seem to be less tense
and how Anna and her dad have made amends
Are you saying this is the final chapter?
Gert
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Yes, this is the final chapter. I know it's a romance, but I can't see them going any farther right now. Anna still needs to heal. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
So question are you going to star another novel?
Gert
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I have another started. It's still a romance but a new area for me. We'll see if I can pull it off. I am a little nervous about it. I should post it next week, unless I get chicken.
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Don't you dare get chicken
Love
Gert
Comment from Shirley McLain
I do hate to see this end. It was an excellent story. I am glad that Anna and her father made up, he seemed to do it rather quickly. He went from fire and brimstone to smooth as silk in a very short time. It wasn't enough for me not to give you six stars. I will be following your next story.
Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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I do hate to see this end. It was an excellent story. I am glad that Anna and her father made up, he seemed to do it rather quickly. He went from fire and brimstone to smooth as silk in a very short time. It wasn't enough for me not to give you six stars. I will be following your next story.
Shirley
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I agree with the speed of the father, but ... I couldn't hold if off any longer. I felt when Anna talked with Troy and said it was a beginning, that she knew it would take longer. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Bravo. This is a very strong post, showing the promise of a romance between Troy and Anna. Maybe Abner will come around and be the perfect father image for Anna. Very good job.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Bravo. This is a very strong post, showing the promise of a romance between Troy and Anna. Maybe Abner will come around and be the perfect father image for Anna. Very good job.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Let's hope he does. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from mjordahl
That was wonderful! I'm going to go back and start from the begining.Congragulations on the finish.I felt the love between these characters
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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That was wonderful! I'm going to go back and start from the begining.Congragulations on the finish.I felt the love between these characters
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent dialogue that really conveys the emotions of the speakers as Anna's mother is angry at her father's implications and Troy is insulted
I'm not blind. I can see - add the period
I love the way Paul stands up for his son, and I love the way Troy stands up for Anna :-)
He's too much of a gentleman to comprise me - compromise me
Time past before Paul came in - passed
which restaurant I wanted to go too - go to
Betty, do you have desert - dessert
I really like the natural-sounding dialogue in this chapter and the family dynamics. You do a great job of showing Anna finally really stand up for herself, and you make the reconciliation with her father sound really believable :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Excellent dialogue that really conveys the emotions of the speakers as Anna's mother is angry at her father's implications and Troy is insulted
I'm not blind. I can see - add the period
I love the way Paul stands up for his son, and I love the way Troy stands up for Anna :-)
He's too much of a gentleman to comprise me - compromise me
Time past before Paul came in - passed
which restaurant I wanted to go too - go to
Betty, do you have desert - dessert
I really like the natural-sounding dialogue in this chapter and the family dynamics. You do a great job of showing Anna finally really stand up for herself, and you make the reconciliation with her father sound really believable :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your eagle eye, I will make the corrections. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
This I a beautiful chapter and a wonderful ending. I was afraid Anna's dad would ruin everything but instead she stood up for herself and it all worked out just fine. I have loved every chapter of this book and look forward to your next novel. Well done.....blessings, chey
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Hi Barbara,
This I a beautiful chapter and a wonderful ending. I was afraid Anna's dad would ruin everything but instead she stood up for herself and it all worked out just fine. I have loved every chapter of this book and look forward to your next novel. Well done.....blessings, chey
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
OOOOOOOh, the air is much cleaner now. Seems like her father had some doubts and almost ruined everything. But, as good things go, he saw the light.
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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OOOOOOOh, the air is much cleaner now. Seems like her father had some doubts and almost ruined everything. But, as good things go, he saw the light.
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
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Smile.