Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Creation Sleeps"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Tegan1311
A very well done poem. It's short, but with a clear and thought provoking message. The picture goes really well with it too.
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A very well done poem. It's short, but with a clear and thought provoking message. The picture goes really well with it too.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Good question done in poetry. No man knows his or her time for it is always. Just pays to be ready when ever. Well done poet.
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Good question done in poetry. No man knows his or her time for it is always. Just pays to be ready when ever. Well done poet.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from words
I am a fan of both sunrise and sunset.
Love the artwork that you chose for this piece.
I do agree, we have a choice to see the beauty and grandeur of life or to ignore it.
Hugs,d
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I am a fan of both sunrise and sunset.
Love the artwork that you chose for this piece.
I do agree, we have a choice to see the beauty and grandeur of life or to ignore it.
Hugs,d
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals,
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?
I know I want to live prepared James 4:14
yet you do not know what tomorrow will bring. What is your life? For you are a mist that appears for a little time and then vanishes.
Well done
God bless
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The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals,
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?
I know I want to live prepared James 4:14
yet you do not know what tomorrow will bring. What is your life? For you are a mist that appears for a little time and then vanishes.
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from l.raven
just before we go the bed on any night could be the last time we would see the light....for you never know...live everyday like it is your last...love as much as you can...no one should leave this world angry...we are in Gods hands....very well written...and I love the picture...luff Linda xxoo
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just before we go the bed on any night could be the last time we would see the light....for you never know...live everyday like it is your last...love as much as you can...no one should leave this world angry...we are in Gods hands....very well written...and I love the picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from dennis0530
Sleep tonight and don't worry about tomorrow. If it comes, it will wake you up; if not then sleep to eternity.
The author writes about the unsureness of tomorrow. Nature probably show us all its splendor at dusk without any promises that we will see it again. It is offered to us mortals as a gift before we rest as a reminder that things of beauty are best enjoyed before sleep because it puts the soul at rest.
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Sleep tonight and don't worry about tomorrow. If it comes, it will wake you up; if not then sleep to eternity.
The author writes about the unsureness of tomorrow. Nature probably show us all its splendor at dusk without any promises that we will see it again. It is offered to us mortals as a gift before we rest as a reminder that things of beauty are best enjoyed before sleep because it puts the soul at rest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is certainly a well written and thought provoking caption. It is a good beginning for a work I assume is still in progress. Nicely done and thank you so sharing this with me.
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This is certainly a well written and thought provoking caption. It is a good beginning for a work I assume is still in progress. Nicely done and thank you so sharing this with me.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from thedreampeddler
Yet another work of art.
You succeed in saying much with little, and you say it very well. It is a fantastic little bit of wisdom.
Great job.
thedreampeddler
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Yet another work of art.
You succeed in saying much with little, and you say it very well. It is a fantastic little bit of wisdom.
Great job.
thedreampeddler
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from rjuselius
"The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals,
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?"
this is a fine philosophical piece of poetic art! mortals may sleep or die. such a profound poem!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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"The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals,
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?"
this is a fine philosophical piece of poetic art! mortals may sleep or die. such a profound poem!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
'If I should die before I wake.....'
I must admit I never have this thought when I go to sleep, even though thoughts of death occur more frequently as we age.
Steve
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'If I should die before I wake.....'
I must admit I never have this thought when I go to sleep, even though thoughts of death occur more frequently as we age.
Steve
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014