Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fields of stone,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Wendyanne
Hi deepwater. You certainly have an awesome talent for expressing yourself in words so deep and memorable. I find war poetry fascinating especially Wilfred Owen's and Siegfried sassoons.
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Hi deepwater. You certainly have an awesome talent for expressing yourself in words so deep and memorable. I find war poetry fascinating especially Wilfred Owen's and Siegfried sassoons.
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Thank you
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
This is a beautiful, haunting poem. It displays the loving heart of a father and husband and all the dreams and desires for his family. A dramatic a lovely poem. Well done.
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This is a beautiful, haunting poem. It displays the loving heart of a father and husband and all the dreams and desires for his family. A dramatic a lovely poem. Well done.
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Thank you
Comment from dotti_1965
This is a very moving peom. I like the way the words flowed. The picture you painted was great and it was solid from start to finish.
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This is a very moving peom. I like the way the words flowed. The picture you painted was great and it was solid from start to finish.
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Thank you
Comment from percival86jack
Why must we have fields of stone? Will we ever see a day when the need to fight in some far off land is no longer? We can only hope... cheers, Jack
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Why must we have fields of stone? Will we ever see a day when the need to fight in some far off land is no longer? We can only hope... cheers, Jack
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Thanks Jack
Comment from bowls
The image of the field of stone is a good one - hard and cold in contrast with the hugs from family. In the seventh line from the end LEAVE'S should be LEAVE. (He can return us or he can leave us.) Just one little suggestion: in line five, if you were to leave out the word OVER, the meter would flow more smoothly.
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The image of the field of stone is a good one - hard and cold in contrast with the hugs from family. In the seventh line from the end LEAVE'S should be LEAVE. (He can return us or he can leave us.) Just one little suggestion: in line five, if you were to leave out the word OVER, the meter would flow more smoothly.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2010
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Thanks for the comments