Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Part One chapter three"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from jadapenn
Phew, caught you just before slipping off for the night. I want to watch TITANIC again. lol.
I liked this chapter. Good thing you added the author's note because I was getting worried. But I should know better - I'm not as hot as my poetry suggests. Just the way I write. lol.
This chapter made good progress with the novel. I love Troy and can feel his emotions. Poor Anna. I hope she is free of that abuser now. Perhaps someone in jail will give him som jolly good servicing.
A few gremlins.
Paul stroked at worn baseball sitting on in a display on his desk (a little gremlin lurking here.)
Troy laughed. "Those were the good old day[s].
After drinking a (cold) glass of [cold] tea and eating cookies
Luv jada
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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Phew, caught you just before slipping off for the night. I want to watch TITANIC again. lol.
I liked this chapter. Good thing you added the author's note because I was getting worried. But I should know better - I'm not as hot as my poetry suggests. Just the way I write. lol.
This chapter made good progress with the novel. I love Troy and can feel his emotions. Poor Anna. I hope she is free of that abuser now. Perhaps someone in jail will give him som jolly good servicing.
A few gremlins.
Paul stroked at worn baseball sitting on in a display on his desk (a little gremlin lurking here.)
Troy laughed. "Those were the good old day[s].
After drinking a (cold) glass of [cold] tea and eating cookies
Luv jada
Comment Written 17-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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Thank you for catching those for me. I do this every time I change things.
Comment from cjsthoughts
WOW! Very intense. As I said I am a victim of domestic violence! I have PTSD! I never heard of Stockholm syndrome - a condition experienced by people who have been held as hostages for some time in which they begin to identify with and feel symphathetic toward their captors
Many abused women are convined they
deserve the abuse. Their self-esteem is extremely low.
It sounds like me!... Im glad your not abused anymore.
Lots of love and respect,
Cheryl
Please take a look at my work!
Thanks again
:)
I have never heard of this!
Being a (VODV)Stockholm syndrome - a condition experienced by people who have been held as hostages for some time in which they begin to identify with and feel symphathetic toward their captors
I cant wait to read whats next??????????
Cheryl
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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WOW! Very intense. As I said I am a victim of domestic violence! I have PTSD! I never heard of Stockholm syndrome - a condition experienced by people who have been held as hostages for some time in which they begin to identify with and feel symphathetic toward their captors
Many abused women are convined they
deserve the abuse. Their self-esteem is extremely low.
It sounds like me!... Im glad your not abused anymore.
Lots of love and respect,
Cheryl
Please take a look at my work!
Thanks again
:)
I have never heard of this!
Being a (VODV)Stockholm syndrome - a condition experienced by people who have been held as hostages for some time in which they begin to identify with and feel symphathetic toward their captors
I cant wait to read whats next??????????
Cheryl
Comment Written 17-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and understanding.
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Thank you! I can relate so much I just posted "I FOUND" Under contest. Could you take a look please!
Thanks...
Comment from Gungalo
God he really beat her badly. I cannot for the life of me understand men that do such a thing!!! I want to hate them, I really do.
Your story is so real and full of details that make it so, such as the things screamed aloud at the ambulance. Girl, you can write up a storm!!!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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God he really beat her badly. I cannot for the life of me understand men that do such a thing!!! I want to hate them, I really do.
Your story is so real and full of details that make it so, such as the things screamed aloud at the ambulance. Girl, you can write up a storm!!!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind reveiw.
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Thank you for your wonderful writing abilities!!!
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Error:
Troy laughed. "Those were the good old day (days)
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Error:
Troy laughed. "Those were the good old day (days)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Keep up the good work. Little Jo would like to have a heart to heart talk with Bobby to show him the errors of his way. Charlie
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I should let her.