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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. I like the way you are slowly building the suspense. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.

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 Comment Written 29-May-2011


reply by the author on 29-May-2011
    Thank you for your kind review and support.
reply by c_lucas on 29-May-2011
    You're welcome, Barbare. Charlie