Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "a life that was of my own choice"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from dbmccarter
I like this message and the format for telling this story. It is good advice for everyone. I really like the art wood. This should do well in the contest.
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I like this message and the format for telling this story. It is good advice for everyone. I really like the art wood. This should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
Comment from TammyGail
I liked this poem nice and a bit different witch is always nice.. I loved this part in your poem "Seeking intimate wealth in the company of friends,
To experience lust, love, anger, tears and pain
Only to survive to see another moonlit night alone,
Then will you be at peace with yourself "
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I liked this poem nice and a bit different witch is always nice.. I loved this part in your poem "Seeking intimate wealth in the company of friends,
To experience lust, love, anger, tears and pain
Only to survive to see another moonlit night alone,
Then will you be at peace with yourself "
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
Comment from ksherwoodrn
Interesting words in the poem. Hopefully most learn from their mistakes but also are not afraid to step out of their comfort shells to try something new and adventuresome....kathleen
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Interesting words in the poem. Hopefully most learn from their mistakes but also are not afraid to step out of their comfort shells to try something new and adventuresome....kathleen
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
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thank you
Comment from amada
A great Ole for you as well. Those spanish matadores for real live a life of charm, danger and audacity as well. And the admiration of all of us. A very well written poem on living a life.
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A great Ole for you as well. Those spanish matadores for real live a life of charm, danger and audacity as well. And the admiration of all of us. A very well written poem on living a life.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
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thank you
Comment from dorenealang
We are all pilgrims I think. Nice poem, but I think that you were supposed to write about what you wanted, should have, almost did in life. Toward the end You changed from "you" to "I", it was a little confusing. I do like you word choices and imagery "seek out your quest,Far from the comforts and well-lit avenues of life" and "As I look down the farthest side of my life with age" very good. I would like to think that I will say that at the end I will be truly content, but it is doubtful. Thanks for sharing
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We are all pilgrims I think. Nice poem, but I think that you were supposed to write about what you wanted, should have, almost did in life. Toward the end You changed from "you" to "I", it was a little confusing. I do like you word choices and imagery "seek out your quest,Far from the comforts and well-lit avenues of life" and "As I look down the farthest side of my life with age" very good. I would like to think that I will say that at the end I will be truly content, but it is doubtful. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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thanks
Comment from amarherig14
Every one makes a choice of the life they want to live, good or bad .That's why God made us free.Then you pay the consequences. I am glad the character in your poem made the right choice. Very well written.Good luck.
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Every one makes a choice of the life they want to live, good or bad .That's why God made us free.Then you pay the consequences. I am glad the character in your poem made the right choice. Very well written.Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
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thank you
Comment from Phoenyx Prodigy
Independence very nice poem the flow was good and the message was clear. I do like the picture it is very nice. I really enjoyed the poem.
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Independence very nice poem the flow was good and the message was clear. I do like the picture it is very nice. I really enjoyed the poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
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thank you
Comment from mumsyone
It's nice to hear someone say they are satisfied with the life they have chosen for themselves. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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It's nice to hear someone say they are satisfied with the life they have chosen for themselves. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
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thank you
Comment from denhagan
This was a beautiful free verse poem about the author living a life that was his own choice.
No negative commentary.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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This was a beautiful free verse poem about the author living a life that was his own choice.
No negative commentary.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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thank you
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You're welcome. Dennis
Comment from rchitwood
Very good and we would all do to take this advice, and live life to the fullest. You have good insight on life and I love the photo.Blessings Rita
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Very good and we would all do to take this advice, and live life to the fullest. You have good insight on life and I love the photo.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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thank you