Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Good continuing chapter, Barbara.

Anna visits her former residence. (Should this be her new residence rather than her former residence?)
(He accepted the it.)

Hope you are doing well.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011

Thank you for your kind review. I was thinking about my next post when I wrote that. DUHHHHHHH, thanks

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

I was glad to see you had posted another chapter of this book. You are a master at keeping your readers in suspense! I hope Mr.Keller will put Anna's fears to rest and also that someone puts Bobby away for all the abuse he has hurt Anna with. Hope you are having a great time on your vacation. You must have master a different computer as I found no mistakes. Blessings, chey

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011

Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

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Short, but well done, Barbara. You impress me that you're keeping up while on vacation. Such dedication! :D Nancy

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011

Thank you for the kind review, I have tried, but haven't done as well at keeping up as I would have liked.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

This popped up for me to read again. So I did, still great and can't identify any changes.
Always a great read for me. I enjoy not only the story but the characters and their depth/struggles....
Well done.
Maureen





I liked this one. I didn`t find it `struggling` or lacking. I found it more of a needed information filler. We got to hear about Anna`s new place and her uncertainties I think seem normal for one who has been abused this way.
So I liked it.
I am not normally good with spag etc. But one did stick out for me. Small one though.
Still enjoying the story and the characters depth.
Well done.
Maureen

Edit check:
`He accepted (the) it.` Remove (the)

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011

Thank you for the kind review. As I was posting I changed that sentence, it had read He accepted the key. I decided I had used key too often, and forget to take out the 'the'

reply by Maureen's Pen on 06-Aug-2011

See you are already ahead of me....I did say I wasn`t so good at spag LOL....
Have a great vacation my friend.
Hugs
Maureen

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.


Paul stood. "Let's do this." (Let's do it.)



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 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011

Thank you for your kind review. I will make that change.

reply by c_lucas on 06-Aug-2011

You're welcome.