Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Part three, Chapter 15"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from robina1978
Yes the art of your husband is so nice. Here Anna and Troy nearly kiss. But he wants her to take her time and heal from her trauma´s first. Although she gets this nasty phone call, she must soon be improving. This as you wrote we are heading towards the end of the book.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Yes the art of your husband is so nice. Here Anna and Troy nearly kiss. But he wants her to take her time and heal from her trauma´s first. Although she gets this nasty phone call, she must soon be improving. This as you wrote we are heading towards the end of the book.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
I will be sorry to come to the ending. I hope Troy is safe from those crazy people, and that the work alarm didn't lead to trouble for him. I'm glad Anna is growing stronger. Your husband is a fine artist. Does he post on FanArt? That is a lovely combination for the two of you, both artists.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Hello, barbara.
I will be sorry to come to the ending. I hope Troy is safe from those crazy people, and that the work alarm didn't lead to trouble for him. I'm glad Anna is growing stronger. Your husband is a fine artist. Does he post on FanArt? That is a lovely combination for the two of you, both artists.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Yes, my husband as a few posts on FanArt. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
A lot fell into place in this chapter. We now, more about troy and why he hesitates to be physical and now there is an interesting wrinkle of a female harrasser. Nice little details, like her playing with the toy truck right before the call. A lot of dimension here. Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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A lot fell into place in this chapter. We now, more about troy and why he hesitates to be physical and now there is an interesting wrinkle of a female harrasser. Nice little details, like her playing with the toy truck right before the call. A lot of dimension here. Great job--Ted
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight
Comment from JW
This is another well written chapter and it will make a great addition to your story. One cannot help but wonder who was on the phone - and what is going to happen next.
Great job. JW
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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This is another well written chapter and it will make a great addition to your story. One cannot help but wonder who was on the phone - and what is going to happen next.
Great job. JW
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
She is being set up I fear. The phone call when Troy is gone and the loud muffler are clues. Can she make the transition over to a strong woman? We shall see. We shall see.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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She is being set up I fear. The phone call when Troy is gone and the loud muffler are clues. Can she make the transition over to a strong woman? We shall see. We shall see.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
Troy has a good head on his shoulders. What he told Anna was a wise decision on his part. A lot of men would have jumped right in there and taken advantage of her. I have a hunch about that alarm going off.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Troy has a good head on his shoulders. What he told Anna was a wise decision on his part. A lot of men would have jumped right in there and taken advantage of her. I have a hunch about that alarm going off.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Anna is beginning to find her strength. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Anna is beginning to find her strength. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
I have missed so much of this story, but I'm pleased to see Anna has finally divorced the evil Bobby and made a life for herself with Troy. What happened to Michael?
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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I have missed so much of this story, but I'm pleased to see Anna has finally divorced the evil Bobby and made a life for herself with Troy. What happened to Michael?
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Michael is at Troy's parents, they are babysitting. Thank you for the kind review.