Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "part 1 Chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from c_lucas
Things are beginning to come together. This is very well written with a good flow of words, making for an interesting read. very good job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Things are beginning to come together. This is very well written with a good flow of words, making for an interesting read. very good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Chapter fifty-four is wonderfully written with riveting and thrilling action. Your dialogue is good you used great narrative and very fine descriptive writing. Oh no, Slim is her exes cousin. I'm frightened for her, she needs be vigilant of her surroundings. Thank God they have guards on them. I wonder if her boss is involved? Hum. I'd recommend chapter fifty-four as a 'must' read. I dig your hubby's wicked cool art work. I look forward to reading further chapters. Keep on writing entertaining stories. I wish you a fabulous day.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Barbara,
Chapter fifty-four is wonderfully written with riveting and thrilling action. Your dialogue is good you used great narrative and very fine descriptive writing. Oh no, Slim is her exes cousin. I'm frightened for her, she needs be vigilant of her surroundings. Thank God they have guards on them. I wonder if her boss is involved? Hum. I'd recommend chapter fifty-four as a 'must' read. I dig your hubby's wicked cool art work. I look forward to reading further chapters. Keep on writing entertaining stories. I wish you a fabulous day.
Melissa.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
So now they know who he is and what ulterior motive he might be using on her. He certainly know how to scare her half to death. Maybe now something will come of it. Sigh ...
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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So now they know who he is and what ulterior motive he might be using on her. He certainly know how to scare her half to death. Maybe now something will come of it. Sigh ...
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I sure hope so. Thank you for the kind review.
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Me too!!