Comment from
Phyllis Stewart
I think it's time to give this muse his pink slip and advertise for a cute young muse with great legs. Dean, Dean, Dean... no wonder your stuff is so dark and scary with a monster must down your throat... of all places. :)
Clever how you post the poem as a picture. I have several done that way... never thought of it before.
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Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from
a.w.brooks
I have to say it is well written and I understand the Muse because he hunts me as well maybe not as much as you but mine like for me to write but he wants me to write all different types of things but one thing I would say is to move the words off of his head due to White on White is hard to see thanks for the read
Comment Written 10-May-2014