King Sawyer
a story poem in rhyming couplets115 total reviews
Comment from Bina1
What a delightful story, quite the ruler there, King Sawyer! An adorable photo, fits so very well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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What a delightful story, quite the ruler there, King Sawyer! An adorable photo, fits so very well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Bina, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Just delightful..........King Sawyer and his minions millions and three
Loved it don't know what to think of Sawyer who is just a delight...thanks for these precious poems...that make him a star
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Just delightful..........King Sawyer and his minions millions and three
Loved it don't know what to think of Sawyer who is just a delight...thanks for these precious poems...that make him a star
God bless
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Jenny, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from babylonia
Brooke,
LOL I didn't see this was for a contest until I reached the bottom. Made me smiggle. Easy to read and follow. I sure miss the days when I was little and played on the beach. Good times. Good luck!
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Brooke,
LOL I didn't see this was for a contest until I reached the bottom. Made me smiggle. Easy to read and follow. I sure miss the days when I was little and played on the beach. Good times. Good luck!
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke,
You're very welcome.
Love,
barbara
Comment from LIJ Red
I suspect I would recognize your writing now even if you didn't sign. Grown-up craftsmanship in poems for kids.
Beyond my suggestion for changes. Free money.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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I suspect I would recognize your writing now even if you didn't sign. Grown-up craftsmanship in poems for kids.
Beyond my suggestion for changes. Free money.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
Ah, I have always known of your brilliance,
and yet each time I read a work of yours,
you manage to sim;ly outdo yourself and
bring your poetic skills up as high as the
sky until you can not be seen with the
naked eye.
Well done.
You've just topped off my weekend
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Ah, I have always known of your brilliance,
and yet each time I read a work of yours,
you manage to sim;ly outdo yourself and
bring your poetic skills up as high as the
sky until you can not be seen with the
naked eye.
Well done.
You've just topped off my weekend
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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fastdigits, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
If anyone should wonder how you got to be the number one ranked poet on this site. A visit to your profile and a quick perusal of your body of work and no more question would there ever be. You are prolific, each effort top notch. I have totally exhausted my store of superlatives trying to describe the awe I feel after reading any number of your most excellent works. Like my favorite entertainer, the dynamic MS Tina Turner, you are also simply the best.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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If anyone should wonder how you got to be the number one ranked poet on this site. A visit to your profile and a quick perusal of your body of work and no more question would there ever be. You are prolific, each effort top notch. I have totally exhausted my store of superlatives trying to describe the awe I feel after reading any number of your most excellent works. Like my favorite entertainer, the dynamic MS Tina Turner, you are also simply the best.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, my friend, for such supportive comments and your generous sixth star. I love Tina Turner too, and am honored you would mention her name in my review :-) Brooke
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Since I praise your work so much, I worry that you might think me insincere. Please believe me, I hold you in very high esteem and regard your talent as monumental.
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I have never found your comments to be insincere. I appreciate hearing from you :-)
Comment from Ben Colder
Well Sawyer my buddy, Grandmother is at again. This time we enter a certain Kingdom made from sand. Looks like a good one. Thanks Brooke another smile is always welcome. Blessings
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Well Sawyer my buddy, Grandmother is at again. This time we enter a certain Kingdom made from sand. Looks like a good one. Thanks Brooke another smile is always welcome. Blessings
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
A brilliant poem Brooke, about building a castle by the sea! This is one of best of its type that I have seen! I really enjoyed it if you got appropriate artwork, it would promote it as a children's work! This was immaculate, I loved it! I read it aloud and it scanned beautifully. Couplet rhyming is smooth, the meter even! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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A brilliant poem Brooke, about building a castle by the sea! This is one of best of its type that I have seen! I really enjoyed it if you got appropriate artwork, it would promote it as a children's work! This was immaculate, I loved it! I read it aloud and it scanned beautifully. Couplet rhyming is smooth, the meter even! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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thanks so much, Roy :-) Brooke
Comment from Amsterdam
They had aluminum in their water
they had pesticides in their food
they had many sons and daughters
some look past been called them all fools
put hate in their books
fake religions they all choose
and we wonder why we're all minions
who still believe the news .
Point well taken.
Great write.
Am
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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They had aluminum in their water
they had pesticides in their food
they had many sons and daughters
some look past been called them all fools
put hate in their books
fake religions they all choose
and we wonder why we're all minions
who still believe the news .
Point well taken.
Great write.
Am
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Am, thank you for your insightful rhyming poetic response and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
Absolutely love this poem - fairy tale about no other than King Sawyer.
Simply a delight to read , and one that Sawyer will for sure enjoy for many years. I agree with the moral of the story LOL... Pili
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Absolutely love this poem - fairy tale about no other than King Sawyer.
Simply a delight to read , and one that Sawyer will for sure enjoy for many years. I agree with the moral of the story LOL... Pili
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Pili, for your encouraging comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome. Smiles. Pili