Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Titan Black
I think you bought up quite a few important topics in this poem. Therefore, it was very thought provoking...and I like that. However, I have noticed (from reading different poems similar to this one), that when poets pick these types of topic, they get so caught up in their emotions; that they forget that they are writing poetry. Therefore, forgetting to be creative within the scheme of things. But I do appreciate your awareness. And you should never change that quality. Keep writing.
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I think you bought up quite a few important topics in this poem. Therefore, it was very thought provoking...and I like that. However, I have noticed (from reading different poems similar to this one), that when poets pick these types of topic, they get so caught up in their emotions; that they forget that they are writing poetry. Therefore, forgetting to be creative within the scheme of things. But I do appreciate your awareness. And you should never change that quality. Keep writing.
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thank you for this
Comment from tedanytime
Pretty deep thoughts provoked here...
mankind has never really brought forth the answer to greed and selfish ambition. then there are the fanatical zealots that must have everyone believing their creed.
There was even one who spoke the answers, but few understood the parables. Man may ultimately bring about his own destruction...
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Pretty deep thoughts provoked here...
mankind has never really brought forth the answer to greed and selfish ambition. then there are the fanatical zealots that must have everyone believing their creed.
There was even one who spoke the answers, but few understood the parables. Man may ultimately bring about his own destruction...
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thanks ted for the review
Comment from James Dooney
You have given us a very poignant message here with this little work my friend. The powers that be have no interest in helping us, so we must do it ourselves. Well done.
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You have given us a very poignant message here with this little work my friend. The powers that be have no interest in helping us, so we must do it ourselves. Well done.
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thanks James
Comment from Ben Colder
I must hand it to you ,poet You present an interesting question. I persuaded that life is a vapor, much like a cloud we all dissipate. Well done. Shalom.
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I must hand it to you ,poet You present an interesting question. I persuaded that life is a vapor, much like a cloud we all dissipate. Well done. Shalom.
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shalom Ben thank you for this review
Gary
Comment from DR DIP
a poignant poem made up of rhetorical questions that we all ask our selves. I enjoyed your questions in the form of a rhetorical poem Well done deepy
thanks for sharing!
dip
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a poignant poem made up of rhetorical questions that we all ask our selves. I enjoyed your questions in the form of a rhetorical poem Well done deepy
thanks for sharing!
dip
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thank you dip for the review
Gary
Comment from Pili Pubul
The way things are going all we need is that nuclear power fall in the hands of a nut, and is plenty of them , then will be a new start for sure. Most of us crave for peace, but don't look good, insanity is growing and will have to be stop. Your poem is excellent , and pose difficult questions to answer...
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The way things are going all we need is that nuclear power fall in the hands of a nut, and is plenty of them , then will be a new start for sure. Most of us crave for peace, but don't look good, insanity is growing and will have to be stop. Your poem is excellent , and pose difficult questions to answer...
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thank you Pili for the review
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You are most welcome. Pili
Comment from Leineco
Pretty deep thoughts here. . .will mankind continue to pave the way to its own destruction, or will man rise to the challenge and stop the greedy faction from driving the engine? I suspect a similar contemplation has plagued man since the beginning of time - - -but it certainly seems we have pushed the limits too far this time around.
Only mankind itself holds its destiny in its hands.
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Pretty deep thoughts here. . .will mankind continue to pave the way to its own destruction, or will man rise to the challenge and stop the greedy faction from driving the engine? I suspect a similar contemplation has plagued man since the beginning of time - - -but it certainly seems we have pushed the limits too far this time around.
Only mankind itself holds its destiny in its hands.
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thank you for the review
Comment from Smoothiecool
well chosen words to allow the reader to see and feel are we as mankind going to rebuild this world or continue to destroy what we have
good visual to portray message
cheers..smoothiecool
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well chosen words to allow the reader to see and feel are we as mankind going to rebuild this world or continue to destroy what we have
good visual to portray message
cheers..smoothiecool
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thank you Smoothie
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welcome..SC
Comment from mfowler
Really like this premise that we might need to rebuild the ark if we are intent on destroying our world and selves. There's some gutsy, important questions posed here about the future:Can governing powers find the determination to abort the tyranny shown by race?
A thoughtful, imposing and intelligent work.
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Really like this premise that we might need to rebuild the ark if we are intent on destroying our world and selves. There's some gutsy, important questions posed here about the future:Can governing powers find the determination to abort the tyranny shown by race?
A thoughtful, imposing and intelligent work.
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thank you for this
Comment from royowen
In scripture it says God will never destroy the world by water, so the next time it will be divine intervention! Man does not learn, from his mistakes, he is more concerned with acquiring wealth, power, revenge, as long as people pursue these things, I don't see hope! Only one! Great concerned write, articulate, descriptively profound, and great imagery, blessings, Roy.blessings, Roy.
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In scripture it says God will never destroy the world by water, so the next time it will be divine intervention! Man does not learn, from his mistakes, he is more concerned with acquiring wealth, power, revenge, as long as people pursue these things, I don't see hope! Only one! Great concerned write, articulate, descriptively profound, and great imagery, blessings, Roy.blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you Roy for the review