Mass Destruction
... by The hands of a child. (see notes)9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This child perspective story, Mass Destruction, is a hoot as we realize that the heavy thoughts are for cereal ohs. I can imagine a few clinging together in the milk, expecting that the spoon of resue was their salvation. Silly cereal.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This child perspective story, Mass Destruction, is a hoot as we realize that the heavy thoughts are for cereal ohs. I can imagine a few clinging together in the milk, expecting that the spoon of resue was their salvation. Silly cereal.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Exactly. And no matter how hard I tried, that green ring would not move away from the yellow one. Oh well, they went down together. :-) Thank you for your review.
Comment from equestrik
This is really kinda funny-those poor circles of cereal! I think kids and their ways of thinking are fascinating. I bet there are more than a few who have similar thoughts.
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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This is really kinda funny-those poor circles of cereal! I think kids and their ways of thinking are fascinating. I bet there are more than a few who have similar thoughts.
Comment Written 06-May-2021
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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That would sure be great, if someone else shared my strange thinking. Looking back, it was kind of violent the way I pretended to destroy the Froot Loops. Ha ha thank you so much for your review and comments. Hugs.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This child sure was an imaginative one, but it's a totally believable way for a child to behave and live. I always had problems with words, through reading novels intended for adults from about age 8 on, and invented meanings for them as I hadn't yet worked out the joys of a dictionary. Even now, I sometimes invent new words, but I'm improving.
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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This child sure was an imaginative one, but it's a totally believable way for a child to behave and live. I always had problems with words, through reading novels intended for adults from about age 8 on, and invented meanings for them as I hadn't yet worked out the joys of a dictionary. Even now, I sometimes invent new words, but I'm improving.
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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Well, how do words get invented? People invent them, right? Don't stop making up words. :-) Thank you so much for your review. I was a strange child.
Comment from Wendy G
Your story reveals your creative imagination even as a young child! It is interesting, and maintains the sense of drama right until the last words. very well written. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Your story reveals your creative imagination even as a young child! It is interesting, and maintains the sense of drama right until the last words. very well written. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your encouragement. Hugs.
Comment from pome lover
well, I'll say one thing- you and this story are true originals!
How's that for judgement?
You really had me fooled, so... good story teller, good plotter and good, very different finale.
well done.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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well, I'll say one thing- you and this story are true originals!
How's that for judgement?
You really had me fooled, so... good story teller, good plotter and good, very different finale.
well done.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Young warped minds is all I can say. i'm glad you were surprised, and I appreciate your complementary and thoughtful review. Hugs.
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you're welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is pretty funny. I had no inkling that your story would end the way it did. It was a total surprise and I sat here laughing. Very good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This is pretty funny. I had no inkling that your story would end the way it did. It was a total surprise and I sat here laughing. Very good job!
Patty
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This is one example why my parents think I'm crazy! I was a strange child. Thank you for your thoughtful review and comments. Hugs.
Comment from Begin Again
Ah! the imagination of the child and his trusty spoon and a bowl of cereal. I would never have guessed where the story was taking me until the very end. Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Ah! the imagination of the child and his trusty spoon and a bowl of cereal. I would never have guessed where the story was taking me until the very end. Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I could totally, and still can, kill a bowl of fruit loops. Thank you so much for your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Eunice Amero
This story was cute. An amazing picture of what it is like to love a cereal and where it comes from and travels to. I felt I was telling a child the words you wrote. That would help a child to like eating cereal. It was cute I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This story was cute. An amazing picture of what it is like to love a cereal and where it comes from and travels to. I felt I was telling a child the words you wrote. That would help a child to like eating cereal. It was cute I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well told and is unique in theme. Your words are descriptive and create great imagery of what was happening in that cereal bowl. I like that you did not mention the actual aspect--the cereal, the spoon etc. Best wishes.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Your contest entry is well told and is unique in theme. Your words are descriptive and create great imagery of what was happening in that cereal bowl. I like that you did not mention the actual aspect--the cereal, the spoon etc. Best wishes.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review. They are very appreciated. Hugs.