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Why Didn't You Tell Me?

A brother finds his sister dead from an overdose.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dr. Nad
Excellent
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Whether this was fiction or true you clearly took us to the place of your pain and invited us to share the primal sense of fear and pain. There are questions that will never be answered. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    Thank you for reading. I appreciate your comments.
reply by Dr. Nad on 14-Feb-2023
    You are most welcome,
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Excellent
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This is powerful writing for such a short story. The subject is topical. The language is forceful. The image is clear. The presentation adds impact to the writing.

Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    Thank you for reading this story. I appreciate your comments.
reply by dellsworthpoet on 14-Feb-2023
    You are welcome.