Love and Loss
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Comment from shelley kaye
a very thought-prooking poem about love and loss and heartache
good word choices with smooth rhyme and flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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a very thought-prooking poem about love and loss and heartache
good word choices with smooth rhyme and flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Shelley xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
"Tell the truth. Express your feelings. If you like someone, tell them. If you don't, leave or at least be upfront with them about. Life should be that simple.
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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"Tell the truth. Express your feelings. If you like someone, tell them. If you don't, leave or at least be upfront with them about. Life should be that simple.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Here, here! Thank you for your review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest.
I can relate. My last relationship was one of extreme emotion, madly in love and scruciating pain when it ended. If I had a chance to do it again I would in a second, perhaps changing a few things.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Excellent entry for the NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest.
I can relate. My last relationship was one of extreme emotion, madly in love and scruciating pain when it ended. If I had a chance to do it again I would in a second, perhaps changing a few things.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much! I understand exactly what you mean. I appreciate your review!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jessica, what a wonderful entry for the NaPoWriMo April contest..Well, to reach out for love is also to reach out to risks. Love is never a safe bet, but it's an invaluable experience. The risk and rewards are worth it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Hi Jessica, what a wonderful entry for the NaPoWriMo April contest..Well, to reach out for love is also to reach out to risks. Love is never a safe bet, but it's an invaluable experience. The risk and rewards are worth it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Well said, Ulla! Thank you so much
Comment from JLR
Jessica this is a wonderful weaving on concept of love or nor love. Your rhymes are unforced and you present a fine contribution to this years NaPoWriMo contest. Wishing you loads of continue success.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Jessica this is a wonderful weaving on concept of love or nor love. Your rhymes are unforced and you present a fine contribution to this years NaPoWriMo contest. Wishing you loads of continue success.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you, I appreciate that so much!
<3
Jessica
Comment from Eternal Muse
It's a nice take on love. Love is a unique emotion that no poet or philosopher could explain; a chemical reaction in the brain, a powerful force to recon with.
You brought it our well. Liked the imagery, visuals and presentation.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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It's a nice take on love. Love is a unique emotion that no poet or philosopher could explain; a chemical reaction in the brain, a powerful force to recon with.
You brought it our well. Liked the imagery, visuals and presentation.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your review and insight!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think each love teaches you something. It gives you what you need at the time. Some is an illusion. Fulfilling those childlike dreams of pure love, while others give us the hard earned love. Others are lives between souls. These all are love. Timeless love is pure. Your poem offers a look at the question. Thought provoking. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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I think each love teaches you something. It gives you what you need at the time. Some is an illusion. Fulfilling those childlike dreams of pure love, while others give us the hard earned love. Others are lives between souls. These all are love. Timeless love is pure. Your poem offers a look at the question. Thought provoking. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Gretchen, thank you so much for your review and for the stars! Means a lot to me<3
Jessica
Comment from Pearl Edwards
When a great love is taken away heart ache steps in. This prologue to your Love and loss book for April writes is very thought provoking Jessica. I enjoyed it and wish you luck in this challenge.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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When a great love is taken away heart ache steps in. This prologue to your Love and loss book for April writes is very thought provoking Jessica. I enjoyed it and wish you luck in this challenge.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much! <3
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fine prologue to your NaPoWriMo endeavour. I think it told us clearly, without any accompanying explanation what we should be expecting from the thirty examples to follow. I'm looking forwards to reading more fine examples of rhyme as the month goes on. kay
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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This is a fine prologue to your NaPoWriMo endeavour. I think it told us clearly, without any accompanying explanation what we should be expecting from the thirty examples to follow. I'm looking forwards to reading more fine examples of rhyme as the month goes on. kay
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Kay! That truly means a lot!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Poem number one! twenty-nine to go. I love this month and read how everyone is doing.
Your poem asks many questions, and you first one I've also asked myself. Is it better to have loved and lost? No, I don't think so. The pain of loss is awful. It doesn't stop until you either realise it was him/her that was the loser, not you. Or until you meet someone who is worth far more than the first love. Well done, this was a lovely poem to start your month with. Good luck with the rest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Poem number one! twenty-nine to go. I love this month and read how everyone is doing.
Your poem asks many questions, and you first one I've also asked myself. Is it better to have loved and lost? No, I don't think so. The pain of loss is awful. It doesn't stop until you either realise it was him/her that was the loser, not you. Or until you meet someone who is worth far more than the first love. Well done, this was a lovely poem to start your month with. Good luck with the rest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Sarah!