Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your haiku was awesome, Debra. I like the use of the colored
font like polka dots. Your syllable count was correct per line.
The image in the mind of readers was perfect even if no picture
had been included.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you so much, Jan :)
Glad you enjoyed the read!
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This was a delightful Haiku. I enjoyed reading it very much. I remember when I was young sitting in those polka dot meadows, weaving daisy crowns. Then we danced as fairies through the meadows. Wonderful days. kay

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Kay :) Glad you enjoyed the read - I used to enjoy making daisy crowns and chains too - simple pleasures.... miss those days x

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

daisies crown

my bountiful birthday bouquet -

polka dot meadow

Your haiku will flow better if you move the possessive "my" next to the adjective word.

I like the nature imagery of the field of daisies. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Hi Gypsy :)
Thank you for your kind feedback and helpful suggestion.
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Just beautiful! I could look at this poem and meadow all day! A lovely offering that truly cheers!

Sending you my best today as always.
Sally xoxo's

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you so much, Sal :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice poem for the club event entry. I enjoyed that you have presented it well and it flows well when it's really loud. Have a good day and God bless Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you so much for your feedback, Patrica :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Daisies and dandelions seem to enjoy each other's company and I see them both everywhere, a fine haiku for the club Debra, much enjoyed, love the coloured letters too, a fine well thought out presentation, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly :)
I have an abundance of both all over my garden - but I don't mind, I love the colour!
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and good presentation, Debra.
-Creative idea with the fonts; I bet
that took some time!
-A well written haiku with
effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-A very good satori line.
-Well done.

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Pam :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-May-2023

You are welcome, Debra.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, you're an April baby so your flower is the daisy and what a lot of effort you went through to alternate the font colors! I love your "polka dot meadow" for your birthday flower haiku! Lovely presentation!

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Pam :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Wow! This sounds and looks so very beautiful. The presentation is superb. Alternating the colours of the letters was a great idea.
Super cool. Thanks so much for sharing.
PS. And you've also used my beloved alliteration on the second line.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Maria :)
Glad you enjoyed the read!
Best wishes as always, Debra xx

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Debra,
This is a nice entry for the "Birthday Flower" event in the Haiku Club. I especially liked your final line,
"polka dot meadow"
That's a great "Aha!" moment, your reflection on the scene at the time.
Sad to think that a lot of people call daisies and dandelions... weeds! Perish the thought.
Hugs,
Kimbob

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Kimbob :) Weeds indeed! What's wrong with some people?!
Best wishes as always, Debra x