Songs of Recovery
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Angels of a Better Nature"A collection of poems around healing.
3 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love that you have invited me to think about the angels in my own life. And I also love the message that goodness is never wholly gone, but echoes into eternity. I have only one suggestion and that is to rework the line "have borne wingless me up." I understand the meaning, but the phrasing is very awkward. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
I love that you have invited me to think about the angels in my own life. And I also love the message that goodness is never wholly gone, but echoes into eternity. I have only one suggestion and that is to rework the line "have borne wingless me up." I understand the meaning, but the phrasing is very awkward. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it and I apologize for the delay in response. I?ll see if I can rephrase that somehow. I hope you have a wonderful week.
Comment from shelley kaye
yes there are earth angels... i have one in my life! and i thank her as often as i can!
a great poem about those helping you
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
yes there are earth angels... i have one in my life! and i thank her as often as i can!
a great poem about those helping you
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful week!
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
This is beautiful. I love how you've captured the beauty of the human spirit and the transformative power of kindness and compassion. Your imagery is vivid and powerful. I was moved by angels' touch being described as softer than owl feathers. The message is inspiring. Thank you!
Xo
Jessica
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
This is beautiful. I love how you've captured the beauty of the human spirit and the transformative power of kindness and compassion. Your imagery is vivid and powerful. I was moved by angels' touch being described as softer than owl feathers. The message is inspiring. Thank you!
Xo
Jessica
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful week!