Guided by Faith
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent!! How do keep track of characters and all that action? Your descriptive writing gives the reader a sense of being a witness to the dialogue and action. It is common she wouldn't want to cal police and the way you write does truly bring each of these characters to life. I'm glad a had a chance to catch up. :)) Alexandra
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Excellent!! How do keep track of characters and all that action? Your descriptive writing gives the reader a sense of being a witness to the dialogue and action. It is common she wouldn't want to cal police and the way you write does truly bring each of these characters to life. I'm glad a had a chance to catch up. :)) Alexandra
Comment Written 28-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. I keep a notebook for each novel I write.
Comment from Pam (respa)
Nice artwork. Tulips are my favorite, too. You wrote a very good chapter with a number of things taking place, as well as showing emotions of the characters involved. It's a shame Emma has such trouble expressing herself and holds things inside. Hopefully, she can learn to express her feelings.
The lighter side of the story was working on the enclosure for Molly. Everyone was organized and had an assigned job to do. You even added a bit of humor with these lines:
"Carl chuckled. "I see why you're building a dog porch. That little critter's a mess."
You raised the bar on this chapter when the man approached Emma and was planning to force her to go with him. Luckily Ace was on the job, and he did a great one. I don't think anyone wants to face a specially trained police dog.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Nice artwork. Tulips are my favorite, too. You wrote a very good chapter with a number of things taking place, as well as showing emotions of the characters involved. It's a shame Emma has such trouble expressing herself and holds things inside. Hopefully, she can learn to express her feelings.
The lighter side of the story was working on the enclosure for Molly. Everyone was organized and had an assigned job to do. You even added a bit of humor with these lines:
"Carl chuckled. "I see why you're building a dog porch. That little critter's a mess."
You raised the bar on this chapter when the man approached Emma and was planning to force her to go with him. Luckily Ace was on the job, and he did a great one. I don't think anyone wants to face a specially trained police dog.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Emma doesn't seem to have done anything that could be called manipulating a situation. Unfortunately, I can't remember what Seth said. I also must have missed the chapter where a guy from college showed up. I am not sure why I don't get notices about this book like I did with the other one. This is a good section moving the story forward and shows how much the locals appreciate Seth and Emma.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Emma doesn't seem to have done anything that could be called manipulating a situation. Unfortunately, I can't remember what Seth said. I also must have missed the chapter where a guy from college showed up. I am not sure why I don't get notices about this book like I did with the other one. This is a good section moving the story forward and shows how much the locals appreciate Seth and Emma.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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You many want check with Tom, something must be wrong with the settings. Thank you for the kind review.
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I don't think I have failed to read some, but there was a two week period in April when I could not get internet and then had an amazing number of things to catch up on. Is the college guy the one parked on the road near her house watching her?
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I don't think I have failed to read some, but there was a two week period in April when I could not get internet and then had an amazing number of things to catch up on. Is the college guy the one parked on the road near her house watching her?
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Maybe???
Comment from lyenochka
Usually Emma and Seth talk out their issues. But Emma is holding in a lot in this chapter. I wonder why she won't open up. Is it because she has feelings for Seth and is afraid that he doesn't?
I did like how the community all came to help work on the dog porch together. I'm guessing there will be tulips in Emma's future!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Usually Emma and Seth talk out their issues. But Emma is holding in a lot in this chapter. I wonder why she won't open up. Is it because she has feelings for Seth and is afraid that he doesn't?
I did like how the community all came to help work on the dog porch together. I'm guessing there will be tulips in Emma's future!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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You nailed Emma's emotions. It will come out in Sunday's post.
Comment from Ulla
I can understand why Emma is upset. It's understandable.
Barbara, I have miscalculated, I have no sixes left to give this that it so obviously deserves. Please do forgive me. I think it's a first. Hugs, Ulla in:)))
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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I can understand why Emma is upset. It's understandable.
Barbara, I have miscalculated, I have no sixes left to give this that it so obviously deserves. Please do forgive me. I think it's a first. Hugs, Ulla in:)))
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Not a problem. Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another great chapter. I am sure you know where you are going with this and eventually, these two will take time to really talk their feelings out and get closer together.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Another great chapter. I am sure you know where you are going with this and eventually, these two will take time to really talk their feelings out and get closer together.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Sanku
So that person could be the one who stalks her with the car? Emma is understandably upset
very smooth continuation of the previous chapter .Hope Emma would stop over reacting ...may be she has a reason.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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So that person could be the one who stalks her with the car? Emma is understandably upset
very smooth continuation of the previous chapter .Hope Emma would stop over reacting ...may be she has a reason.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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We'll see what happens next. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Barbara,
Your chapter is easy to follow, and your dialogue furthers your story nicely. As a dog owner, I like the way you include the dogs in your story.
Good luck, Barbara.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Barbara,
Your chapter is easy to follow, and your dialogue furthers your story nicely. As a dog owner, I like the way you include the dogs in your story.
Good luck, Barbara.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I actually have a reviewer who says I need to omit the dogs.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a very well written chapter. There must be a reason that Emma is so standoffish from Seth. I hope Emma and Seth can actually become great friends and more. This has great descriptive words and very good dialogue. And what about the college person? love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Barbara, This is a very well written chapter. There must be a reason that Emma is so standoffish from Seth. I hope Emma and Seth can actually become great friends and more. This has great descriptive words and very good dialogue. And what about the college person? love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Yes, we will find out part of the reason, Emma is standoffish next week. Thank you for the kind review.
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I can't wait my friend!😊💕❤️
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Poor Seth. Both he and Emma have crosses to bear, and both need to start trusting each other. What happened in the past, should stay in the past. My mum told me that!! Lol. This was another excellent chapter, Barb, and whoever that awful man was, I hope Seth gets him! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Poor Seth. Both he and Emma have crosses to bear, and both need to start trusting each other. What happened in the past, should stay in the past. My mum told me that!! Lol. This was another excellent chapter, Barb, and whoever that awful man was, I hope Seth gets him! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. More about Seth will be coming out.