Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Chapter 30"Can faith guide our path?
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Comment from Daylily
I am so behind in my reviewing and am trying to catch up a bit today. This chapter is another good one keeping the story fresh and moving along.
The only thing I can suggest is to edit this sentence so that the word had is not used twice close together. It is a power-draining word:
The fireworks display had ended and almost everybody had left when Emma petted Ace.
Congratulations on your forthcoming novel! Smiles, Lily
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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I am so behind in my reviewing and am trying to catch up a bit today. This chapter is another good one keeping the story fresh and moving along.
The only thing I can suggest is to edit this sentence so that the word had is not used twice close together. It is a power-draining word:
The fireworks display had ended and almost everybody had left when Emma petted Ace.
Congratulations on your forthcoming novel! Smiles, Lily
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and I'll check that area and see what I can do.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Okay say know how to have fun too and complete each other, truly I want a guy like this in my life:) can I borrow him? Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Okay say know how to have fun too and complete each other, truly I want a guy like this in my life:) can I borrow him? Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
This is another great chapter and I love that Seth and Emma both agree they are in a serious relationship. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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This is another great chapter and I love that Seth and Emma both agree they are in a serious relationship. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I read this last night in bed, trying to keep up, but I'm finding it hard at the moment. It's nice now to see Seth and Emma are openly showing their feelings, it should save Emma a lot bother from other men.
I wonder what science teacher has been making meths? That is lethal stuff if they are making it for adicts to drink.
Congratulations on your published book! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I read this last night in bed, trying to keep up, but I'm finding it hard at the moment. It's nice now to see Seth and Emma are openly showing their feelings, it should save Emma a lot bother from other men.
I wonder what science teacher has been making meths? That is lethal stuff if they are making it for adicts to drink.
Congratulations on your published book! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the well wishes. I truly hope you're not over doing it. I want you to completely heal. My prayers continue for you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
An excellent chapter that covers a number of issues. It begins well with the activities and he fireworks, but the real fireworks came a bit later. It has to be difficult when someone is involved with a police officer. It has to cause a lot of worry for the person he or she is involved with. I was hoping Emma would get home okay so that worked out.
It sounds like a very serious issue that Seth and others in the department have to deal with. I thought it was going to be Charlie Michaels since I didn't know what he did, but he isn't a teacher. Seth's comment about the note making sense after tonight is intriguing.
Emma has a good idea of pursuing social work.
A couple of things in the following:
a master's degree in social working. That way I can work with troubled teens. To be a 'Community In Schools' worker a master's degree is required.
I would say degree in social work. I would re-work the sentences that follow to reduce the number of times 'work' is used in these 3 sentences.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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An excellent chapter that covers a number of issues. It begins well with the activities and he fireworks, but the real fireworks came a bit later. It has to be difficult when someone is involved with a police officer. It has to cause a lot of worry for the person he or she is involved with. I was hoping Emma would get home okay so that worked out.
It sounds like a very serious issue that Seth and others in the department have to deal with. I thought it was going to be Charlie Michaels since I didn't know what he did, but he isn't a teacher. Seth's comment about the note making sense after tonight is intriguing.
Emma has a good idea of pursuing social work.
A couple of things in the following:
a master's degree in social working. That way I can work with troubled teens. To be a 'Community In Schools' worker a master's degree is required.
I would say degree in social work. I would re-work the sentences that follow to reduce the number of times 'work' is used in these 3 sentences.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Charlie Michaels is the sports store manager who donated the gift cards for the July 4th celebration. I will work on that. Thank you for the suggestion. I appreciate the help.
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I picked that up in the notes. You are welcome for the review and the suggestion.
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on your upcoming publication, Barbara!
Another great chapter revealing how Seth and Emma are able to adapt to one another. Seth supports her career goals. Emma understands his police job and that means sometimes she'll be without him because of work.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Congratulations on your upcoming publication, Barbara!
Another great chapter revealing how Seth and Emma are able to adapt to one another. Seth supports her career goals. Emma understands his police job and that means sometimes she'll be without him because of work.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the well wishes and the kind review.
Comment from Navada
Congrats on your new novel nearing publication! I am continuing to enjoy the unfolding relationship between Seth and Emma and the fact that she is continuing to do her own thing and flourish with no co-dependency. I feel there is more to learn about the science teacher in future chapters.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Congrats on your new novel nearing publication! I am continuing to enjoy the unfolding relationship between Seth and Emma and the fact that she is continuing to do her own thing and flourish with no co-dependency. I feel there is more to learn about the science teacher in future chapters.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the well wishes and the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
That is very exciting news about your novel. Sounds like you are moving along at a steady pace.
This chapter had a lot going on. Very active and full of bustle. An enjoyable read with you keeping a steady good pace.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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That is very exciting news about your novel. Sounds like you are moving along at a steady pace.
This chapter had a lot going on. Very active and full of bustle. An enjoyable read with you keeping a steady good pace.
D
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the well wishes and the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess it's always good when you canine buddy takes up with your boyfriend/girlfriend, not that it's so good they'd rather be with them, but at least you know they are good people. Dogs have a better sixth sense than humans. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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I guess it's always good when you canine buddy takes up with your boyfriend/girlfriend, not that it's so good they'd rather be with them, but at least you know they are good people. Dogs have a better sixth sense than humans. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Dogs sure do. I don't trust anybody my dog doesn't like. Thank you for kind review and understanding.
Comment from judiverse
Great work, and congratulations on your publication. I'm excited for you. I have so much catching up to do I don't know where to begin. I enjoyed this chapter very much. It sounds like Seth and Emma are about to make it official. She has grown up a lot, and her plan to get a degree in social work is a good idea. I hope the drug note isn't going to mean more trouble ahead. It's something that will have to be resolved before things come to an end. Best of luck to you. judi
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Great work, and congratulations on your publication. I'm excited for you. I have so much catching up to do I don't know where to begin. I enjoyed this chapter very much. It sounds like Seth and Emma are about to make it official. She has grown up a lot, and her plan to get a degree in social work is a good idea. I hope the drug note isn't going to mean more trouble ahead. It's something that will have to be resolved before things come to an end. Best of luck to you. judi
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you for taking time to review. I appreciate it. Please take care of yourself.