Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

Nothing can give as much joy as knowing that another person loves us, and chooses to love us. Most of the time we act selfishly, and we need to act out of genuine kindness.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024

Thank you very much, Mark.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Love spooning and giving and receiving back rubs, what a beautiful read, and example of this form, your first stanza says it all, when you love someone like that, all is good, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I will become violent if someone tries to tickle me. Lol. I like the intimate visual of a couple spooning. It is such a pure act. Like protection in the night. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

I wasn't sure which word is better... tickled... or scratched.... literally scratch is correct

Thank you very much, Gretchen.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

hate being tickled lol.

life times -- i think this should be one word

great gogyohka suite i liked the one word lines of the first stanza, then spreading out in the second

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

I fixed it. I wasn't sure but scratch translates better. I don't like being tickled

Thank you very much Shelley

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, when we find that person, we share unconditional love with we do fit together so perfect. Not so say there won't be problems, but they it works it's self out. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

Thank you very much Barbara

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Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

Oh my goodness, a back tickler. Hidden innuendo or hairy bellied fellow. That is for the reader to decide.

I six starred this because your passion really shines through the writing.

As always, most enjoyable!
Douglas

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Hi Douglas, no double meaning. Have you ever spoon in bed with wife or girlfriend? There's no double meaning, and tickles is my favorite thing she I was little. I would pay someone to do it all day. LoL

When I was little it was my grandma or sister that did the ticking. We used to play games writing something on the back and guessing what it was.

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review.

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reply by Douglas Goff on 17-Mar-2024

I know, I was teasing. My kids do the writing game on my back. You are a great writer, my friend. All your works deserve sixes. I just try to pick the ones that tickle me!
Douglas

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

Thank you

Comment from Jessica Moore1

Excellent

I loved this! So romantic yet simple, using only one syllable in some of the lines. I think we all wish we were someone's number one choice. Someone that will love us no matter what and we love them back just the same. "I am yours, you are mine", what a great ending to a beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

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