Comment from karenina

Excellent

This is an enigma! Your story is captivating and I anxiously read ahead to see what happened. True story and so -- did you ever find out how it was possible for such a thing to happen?

Why would they have the entrance open if there was no exit?

Oh my.

This must have been a miracle!

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

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reply by the author on 28-May-2024

Karen,

Thank you for your review. You surely are astute in noting inconsistencies in my writing. In the case of the cave in which I found myself stuck, I entered through a gap that allowed me to gain access. When my flashlight failed halfway into the cave I had to figure out how to exit in complete darkness until I entered the small chamber where a a faint glimmer of light from above entered the cave.

All the best,

Eugene

reply by karenina on 28-May-2024

Please do not think I meant to be critical! I was curious!

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is an amazing story. Twenty-four hours in a cave, is no wonder you were crying. I can't imagine why it would have be sealed in such a way you couldn't enter it.

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

A well written, short story, and I enjoyed reading it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. May you have a very blessed week and may God bless you. Patricia .

 Comment Written 28-May-2024