2024 Japanese Poetry
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4 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
The moon is a wonderful sight, thank you for your notes about "aqua" the blue moon is quite rare, and we are lucky to view this, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
The moon is a wonderful sight, thank you for your notes about "aqua" the blue moon is quite rare, and we are lucky to view this, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much, kym.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
umm... there's only stanza... lol
but that one stanza is really good
with nice imagery and smooth flow
an aqua blue moon sounds cool!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
umm... there's only stanza... lol
but that one stanza is really good
with nice imagery and smooth flow
an aqua blue moon sounds cool!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I know what a "blue moon" is but am not sure what the "blue aqua moon" is. Is the color affected by viewing from the ocean? I remember the Greek mythology called her Artemis and in Roman, she was Diana. I wonder if your poem came before the picture or the gorgeous picture inspired you.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
I know what a "blue moon" is but am not sure what the "blue aqua moon" is. Is the color affected by viewing from the ocean? I remember the Greek mythology called her Artemis and in Roman, she was Diana. I wonder if your poem came before the picture or the gorgeous picture inspired you.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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To see the aqua blue moon you have to use your imagination. In reality is just a blue moon, which are very rare. I will add a note in my author notes. Thanks!
Thank you very much, big sister. Your reviews are always helpful and kind, I appreciate it.
love,
marival
Comment from royowen
I think perhaps a blue aqua moon is perhaps rarer than a blue moon, that then again, so are moon goddesses, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy,
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
I think perhaps a blue aqua moon is perhaps rarer than a blue moon, that then again, so are moon goddesses, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy,
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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To see the aqua blue moon you have to use your imagination. In reality is just a blue moon, which is very rare. I will add a note in my author notes. Thanks!
gypsy
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Of course, you don?t have add the note Gypsy