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Turkey Shenanigans

A fully cooked Christmas turkey moves on its own!

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a very entertaining story of the turkey that rose up at dinner as it was controlled by a mechanical device! How funny that must have been, even if it disrupted Christmas dinner. I enjoyed your Christmas tale, partly invented and partly true, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
    Hi Dolly

    Thank you for the positive feedback for this story. This incident truly did happen, I just thought it would be fun to write it from a different pov and my mom's seemed like the best.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
    Hi Dolly

    Thank you for the positive feedback for this story. This incident truly did happen, I just thought it would be fun to write it from a different pov and my mom's seemed like the best.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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This chapter is a testament to the enduring bonds of family, the innocence and creativity of childhood, and the ability to find joy and laughter even in difficult circumstances. The touching conclusion reflects the mother's pride in her son and her bittersweet memories of those no longer with them, adding depth and emotional resonance to the story.

Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
    Thank you for such a positive review. The story in question did happen, I just thought it would be more interesting from my mom's perspective. I think I did her justice.