2024 Japanese Poetry
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9 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
I love the smell of rain, right before and after, and also freshly cut grass. This is quite a zenful piece you have crafted, Gypsy. This took me to my happy place.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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I love the smell of rain, right before and after, and also freshly cut grass. This is quite a zenful piece you have crafted, Gypsy. This took me to my happy place.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
After a soothing gentle rain, it does seem that the air, the flowers, and all around us has been cleansed. Thank you for not only sharing this poem but this presentation with us.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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After a soothing gentle rain, it does seem that the air, the flowers, and all around us has been cleansed. Thank you for not only sharing this poem but this presentation with us.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love the touch of rhyme flowing smoothly through this
"jump into the river of life and breathe in the scent" is my fave line - say so much with more between the words
a great gogyohka poem with cool lotus pics
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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love the touch of rhyme flowing smoothly through this
"jump into the river of life and breathe in the scent" is my fave line - say so much with more between the words
a great gogyohka poem with cool lotus pics
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a lovely, inspiring verse, filling the senses with life-giving elements and leaving a palpable sensation of refreshment and renewal. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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What a lovely, inspiring verse, filling the senses with life-giving elements and leaving a palpable sensation of refreshment and renewal. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katiemae1977
I loved this Gypsy. I could use up all my sixes on you!
I love the opening line and of course the rest.
You have me actually smelling the flowers and soil after the rain.
Beautifully done.
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I loved this Gypsy. I could use up all my sixes on you!
I love the opening line and of course the rest.
You have me actually smelling the flowers and soil after the rain.
Beautifully done.
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, katiemae
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
I remember one poet who is not here anymore loved the word "petrichor" which means the "smell of the dry earth after a rain." I like the way you gathered up the sun, the river, and ended up with this scent.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I remember one poet who is not here anymore loved the word "petrichor" which means the "smell of the dry earth after a rain." I like the way you gathered up the sun, the river, and ended up with this scent.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I heard that word before but I don't like the sound.
Love 😊
Marival ❤️
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I agree! I don't like the sound either. Lol.
Have a good night's sleep! 💖😊💤🎵🎶
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful imagery in this write, Marival. I absolutely love the opening line. It leaps off the page and draws the reader into the poem. There are some people who naturally radiate light. A very attractive quality although a bit too overpowering for some.
Excellent work as always
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Beautiful imagery in this write, Marival. I absolutely love the opening line. It leaps off the page and draws the reader into the poem. There are some people who naturally radiate light. A very attractive quality although a bit too overpowering for some.
Excellent work as always
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Cheryl
Gypsy hugs 😊
Marival
Comment from Julie G1
So well expressed. This verse explored a great response to the prompt, using apt vocabulary and imagery for the interconnections of the soul. Overall, worked well for this reader.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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So well expressed. This verse explored a great response to the prompt, using apt vocabulary and imagery for the interconnections of the soul. Overall, worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
I believe that we are all connected to nature because we make up part of it. Your poem has very nice theme and is beautifully illustrated. Is that the lotus flower? I know that it has great significance in Buddhist culture.
RJ
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I believe that we are all connected to nature because we make up part of it. Your poem has very nice theme and is beautifully illustrated. Is that the lotus flower? I know that it has great significance in Buddhist culture.
RJ
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Yes, it's a lotus flower of enlightenment and rebirth. It's a popular concept in Japanese poetry.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 😊